oh my gosh. I loved this. It actually made me lol (no really- my Mum wanted to know what i was laughing at)

:)

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I'm glad you liked it
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Haha!!! Definitely not the sentence you'd want your almost one year old son to say! Very funny, great job!!!

WhatAboutRegulus

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hehehe not what you would expect from a one year old but stil hehe!

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Hahahahaha! I spat out water while reading this and ran for my life too! [My mom was brandishing a huge knife at me for spilling water on the computer keyboard.] Anyways, loved it.

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hahhaha, I have already read this story and left a review, but when my account got kicked off, everything was deleted.This was so funny! Poor Sirius, though.

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thanks for the review :D:D

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this was a riot!!!
i wonder wat evil schemes lily came
up with to hurt sirius
but harry's first sentence
"of course you’re good shag silly"
that was brilliant

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thanks for the comment.

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AWESOME! how about you do James Jr. first sentance?

Author's Response: That's actually a really good idea, I could go through a load of the characters first words and sentances.

Thanks a load for that idea and thanks for the reviex

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Haha, this amused me a lot :)

The bit about Sirius been addicted to Harry's babyfood? Ingenious :D

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Omg! So funny. I loved it.

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this is hilarious! Good job!

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That really made me laugh! A very nice fic 10/10

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Haha. Thats hilarious.

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ahahahahahaha that was funny.. poor Sirius.. teeheehee x] you have some capital letters missing.. other than that, I didn't see anything wrong with it. Keep writing :)

Author's Response: thank you.
I will check for the capitals.

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That's great! I loved it!

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oh that was fun... i loved it

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haha...that is funny. Of course Harry would learn some of his words from Uncle Sirius.

Author's Response: Thank you. I knew Sirius must have made something happen to make him get in Lily's bad books.

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ps. Kewl name btw.

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lol Really Funny!

how does a baby harry speak so well!?

Author's Response: thank you.

i'm thinking hes almost one so hes starting his first sentances

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Aww that's funny. ‘of course you’re good shag silly.’
Ha-lar-ious!
and Sirius is addicted to Harry's baby food. Nice touch.
Good Job. :D

IloveNeville.

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i thought it should have one of Sirius' addictions in it (its gunna be in my next story)

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ps. neville rocks

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ha, lol so funny, run Sirius! oh well, great story

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this is a really good start! the plot is adorable and i love the dialouge and everything... so great job :]
the only thing that would really make it better is grammar and little things like that.
oh, and it's spelled 'sentence'... lol don't worry i used to spell it wrong all the time until i finally realized how to spell it :]
so yeah lovelovelove the plot, just grammar will take it to the next level!

Author's Response: I'm glad u like it miss dramaqueen728 and as for your problem with it i am getting it sorted and grammer is my weakness.

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hahahaha i loved it! very cute!

Author's Response: i loved it too. Its good really.

thank you for your comment.

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That was very interesting. Good job.

Author's Response: hmmm ill take it that means good interesting.

thank you

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Oh my gosh! That's funny to hear a little kid say! I liked the way you ended it; it sounded like something Sirius would do! Great story!

Author's Response: i know. Thanks

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haha this is sooo funny

Author's Response: good good thats what i was aiming for.

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This is really crazy and weird but kind of cute as well.

Author's Response: umm.. thank you.

i like the crazy and wierd bit but thats probably because im in a good mood and i definatly like the cute bit.

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