{reviewid: 2571810, reviewer: 'harrypotterrox'}
| Review #1, by harrypotterrox | Speech |
15th August 2011:
o god. ear ear? you're not doing that cuz george lost his ear are u?
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{reviewid: 2447814, reviewer: 'JennyMc'}
9th December 2010:
Aw, I really liked this. It was cute and I feel like it's something Ron would say. Ginny giving him that look was perfect. :)
-Jen
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{reviewid: 2389415, reviewer: 'AlbusRebeccaPotter'}
4th August 2010:
slight tear in my eye... I love it. Well done :)
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{reviewid: 1868060, reviewer: 'The_Nameless_One'}
18th March 2008:
I love the emotion in Ron's speech. Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you!
I figured by this point Ron had increased his emotional understanding beyond the range of a teaspoon.
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{reviewid: 1827369, reviewer: 'AHeat'}
11th February 2008:
This was really good, just the way I'd imagine that scene! Not too heartfelt, but just the perfect mix of humor and emotion. Great Job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I captured it as you imagined it!
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{reviewid: 1822861, reviewer: 'Lily%20Marie%20Evans%20Potter'}
8th February 2008:
This story is one of my favorites, the emotion comes across really well!! I especially got teary-eyed when Ron mentioned Fred! I miss him a lot, but I liked that George was able to crack a joke anyway! A one-shot I wrote about Lily and James got validated recently, please read and review!
Lily M.E Potter
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad that the emotion comes across. I really wanted to illustrate the George was healing. So many people write him on this horrible spiral to destruction but I just don't think he would be that way.
I will go and read your story right away!
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{reviewid: 1820797, reviewer: 'harrylilyjames'}
6th February 2008:
awe!! that was sooo cute! i really really liked it!
the speech was really sweet... it was funny but full of emotions at the same time.
10/10!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I really think that real life is like that. I have learned that some of life's most difficult and sad experiences become the most important and even humorous!
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{reviewid: 1820081, reviewer: 'Potterfreak4'}
5th February 2008:
OMG That was so good... I am crying... Great job!!!
Author's Response: I am glad that you felt the emotion of the piece!
Thanks for the postive review!
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{reviewid: 1819972, reviewer: 'CRW'}
5th February 2008:
"I met Harry on the Hogwarts express. I might not have asked him to share his compartment had I known I would end up shagging my little sister."
Either you made a small error with a pronoun or the next issue of the Daily Prophet will have Rita Skeeter reporting the scandal of the year.
Author's Response: That is too funny!!
Thanks for a keen eye, I am changing that forthwith!!
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{reviewid: 1819725, reviewer: 'Marauderette'}
5th February 2008:
Aww! It's so sad! I miss Fred. I love the "Ear, ear" part. George is such a loser. I loved it! Good job!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! I miss Fred too!
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{reviewid: 1819707, reviewer: 'Dru%20Dreams'}
5th February 2008:
That was so sweet! I had tears in my eyes when he talked about Fred and at the end. And I love the 'ear, ear' from George. I wonder how many will truly catch that! LOL Very good! I give it a 10/10!
Author's Response: Thanks for that review. It is always nice to hear that ones writing can express emotion! I also wanted to express that George still had a sense of humor and that he was healing.
Thanks again for the read and review!
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