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Review #1, by Pink_Princess12 The Real Hero

1st March 2008:
Wow! That was really good! I was suprised though, because I totally thought that it was Ginny! Lol, it was great!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #2, by Ariana_Gryffindor The Real Hero

21st February 2008:
So hi.

i read this story and i have to say although i am not a big fan of harry/Cho story's, because from the books i see cho as very sureficial, even so i liked it a bit. it was battle and that's what caught me, as well as the vranticness of thought's.

Don't take this the wrong way but my bitof advice for this chapter/story is that i would hahve liked to see a bit more description. when i get entranced into a story i fell as if i too am there watching on. With your's i am sorry i didn't feel it.

it was a good jobzand my friend reading over my shoulder is now poking me and saying she liked it. She she says good job and so do i.

Stephanie

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the really great review! I have problems trying to go into more detail with stories and I always go too fast, skipping over important details and such. I'm trying to slow down with that sort of thing. I may edit this story to make it better, but I might not.

Thank your friend for me! It was awesome of her (and you) to read my story! Thanks!!


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Review #3, by Im not askin ur name. You dont needto know mine. The Real Hero

17th February 2008:
um... Good, I guess but the last two sentences were kindof random. um.

Author's Response: I know... I just couldn't find a good way to end it. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #4, by phoenixfire46 The Real Hero

12th February 2008:
WHY CHO???!!!? I HATE CHO! I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE GINNY!!!
and didn't harry break up with cho? actually no they just sort of fell apart (i quote harry). anyway, i hope you liked feeling evil and you did torture me!

Author's Response: Well I did give you a couple if hints. I mean, why would Ginny call her brothers Bill Weasley and Charlie Weasley? And yeah, they're broken up, but in Cho's mind Harry broke up with her because she still loved him. First review on this story! Thanks!

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