you have written really well, the only thing i would like to say that (and i appreciate that you may be american - i don't know) but its mum here and not mom as harry is british - just a little nit pick! but other than that, its a good uptake of what could have happened afterwards!!! x Report Review
Ron has been out of the country - he went to Eygpt, remember? Also, it should be holiday, not vacation. Only Americans go on vacation. ;) Apart from that, really good! Report Review
Cool! Very Cool! Awesome!Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! Next chapter up as soon as it's validated! Stay well! Keep reading... Gwyn Report Review
Awesome! Totally Awesome! Report Review
This chapter is also very well done. Keep writing, you are doing a splendid job. Report Review
Terrific start to your story! Very well done.Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) Next chapter up as soon as it's validated!! Stay well! Keep reading... Gwyn Report Review
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