6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by charlz1983 The End, The Beginning

18th February 2008:
you have written really well, the only thing i would like to say that (and i appreciate that you may be american - i don't know) but its mum here and not mom as harry is british - just a little nit pick! but other than that, its a good uptake of what could have happened afterwards!!! x

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Review #2, by dumbledorefluertwins Reliving the Past

17th February 2008:
Ron has been out of the country - he went to Eygpt, remember? Also, it should be holiday, not vacation. Only Americans go on vacation. ;)

Apart from that, really good!

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Review #3, by Echo95 Moving, Funeral

13th February 2008:
Cool! Very Cool! Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome review! Next chapter up as soon as it's validated! Stay well! Keep reading...
Gwyn


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Review #4, by Echo95 The End, The Beginning

13th February 2008:
Awesome! Totally Awesome!

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Review #5, by seeker68 Moving, Funeral

13th February 2008:
This chapter is also very well done. Keep writing, you are doing a splendid job.

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Review #6, by seeker68 The End, The Beginning

13th February 2008:
Terrific start to your story! Very well done.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :) Next chapter up as soon as it's validated!! Stay well! Keep reading...
Gwyn


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