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Review #1, by Sushmita ~One~

29th November 2016:
Loved it and all of them are so true to character. I wish ud write more one shots on Fred and George, maybe even the incident of them stealing it from Filch and figuring out how to get the map to reveal itself.

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Review #2, by Dojh167 ~One~

20th June 2015:
Hufflepuff House Cup 2015 Review

This is such a fun idea! Was the point of the challenge to make them find out about each other, or did you just work it out that way?

Molly taking her anger out on a grindylow is a toilet is a marvelously perfect way to establish the comedic tone for this story.

Fred and George are always so quick on the draw, that it is really interesting to see them speechless. And this is definitely something that would have that effect on them!

I love George's "are proud to be present" it still expresses his awe at the situation, but also shows him getting back into his normal rhythm with Fred.

Haha, and the part about wanting autographs!

I also like the very different reactions that Lupin and Sirius have to being found out. It really shows how they have both changes (and not) over the years.

Thanks for sharing this!


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Review #3, by HeyMrsPotter ~One~

20th June 2015:
Hello again! I hope you don't mind me reviewing older stories, the summary for this one really grabbed my attention, I was keen to see how you wrote the twins' reaction to finding out who the marauders really were.

This is another fantastically feel-good story :D Any time I feel down I'm going to visit your author page for a good cheering up :p You have such a good knack for writing the characters, your Fred and George were totally perfect. You had their speech spot-on which is the thing I find most difficult about writing the twins, you have just the right amount of them finishing each others sentences without overdoing it. I particularly liked the part where they recited the quote from the Marauders Map when the penny finally dropped. The idea of them wanting Sirius and Remus' autographs is HILARIOUs. I also really liked Sirius and Remus' interaction with each other, Remus ever the sensible one keeping Sirius in check♥

Another lovely read :)

Hufflepuff House Cup 2015

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Review #4, by Lady Asphodel ~One~

11th July 2014:
The mischievousers unite! *Laughs*

I love takes on the twins meeting or discovering the Marauders! And yes, Sirius would encourage Fred and George's behavior while Remus is trying to do the opposite *laughing*.

I forgot all about the twins apparating around the Black's house. This surely does bring memories!

I can see (if Sirius lived) [that he at least] would have worked with the Weasley twins to create a lot more mischief! *grins widely*

This was a really cool read!

~ House Cup 2014: Event 5

- Asphodel

Author's Response: I really hope the twins did find out that Sirius and Remus made the Marauder's Map. I feel like JKR should have written something about that!

I bet Sirius would have loved to help the twins out. Imagine what he could've done as a consultant for Weasley's Wizard Wheezes. *sigh*

Thanks so much for reviewing!

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Review #5, by Beeezie ~One~

10th July 2014:
(I'm not sure that this counts for Decree #7, because Lupin isn't one of their professors right then, but since he is a professor, I thought it was worth a try!)

I loved the housekeeping part of OotP, so one-shots that delve further into it always entertain me. I suspected that might be particularly true of a one-shot you wrote, because I've tended to really enjoy them, and I was right!

I've always wondered when (or if!) Fred and George found out who Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs were. I always suspected they must have at some point - what with Harry's Patronus and Sirius's nickname and Remus being a werewolf - and I've always wished we could have seen it.

You describe it exactly as I'd imagine it would happen, right down to their being taken aback (and kind of disgusted) that Pettigrew was part of the Marauders. I loved this - and I loved Remus, responsible(ish) to the last.

Amazing job!

House Cup 2014 Review - Ravenclaw

Education Decree #7

Author's Response: Totally counts, cause he was a professor! And his firing was so unfair. Stupid Snape.

I liked the siege on Grimmauld Place, too. It was funny to think of Molly making them all clean and de-infest the rooms. She's such a homemaker, the house probably horrified her when they all moved in.

I can't imagine it never came up! Fred and George staying with Sirius and Remus, they would have had to mention the map at some point, I don't know I just feel like that had to come out at some point. Obviously not in front of Molly or she would've tried to confiscate the map ;)

Thanks so much for the review!

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Review #6, by marauderfan ~One~

3rd June 2013:
This is a wonderful missing moment. I love the Marauders and I love the twins, so it was bound to be good :) I could totally see this happening, the characters are spot on. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I had fun with this one, though it isn't one of my favorites. Sometimes I think about taking it down but then I get a kind review like yours and I think I should keep it up after all. :) Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #7, by Ms Michelle Radcliffe ~One~

16th July 2012:
love it!! though, did the twins ever get the autographs? you could probably make that into an interesting one-shot...??

Author's Response: Oh I'm sure they did :) They were living in the same house as them after all. Thank you so much for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Review #8, by GryffindorGal ~One~

10th March 2011:
Wow this is really good and you've got the characters pretty much spot on :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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Review #9, by liza_potter ~One~

30th December 2010:
Aw, what a great missing moment! Figures Fred and George would want Sirius' and Remus' autograph. :P

I loved it. Everyone was very in-character, from Fred and George's awe to Remus' embarrassment to Sirius' encourgement of the twins and the mention of an angry and stern Molly. Great job! It was short, sweet, to the point and I wouldn't have it any other way. =]

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it! I wrote this one off-the-cuff a while back, on re-reading now it seems very rough to me. Bit embarrassing now haha. Well I'm so relieved that it still reads well to others! Thank you for reviewing!

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Review #10, by Siriius ~One~

5th August 2010:
Brilliant! Absolutely loved this; was laughing right to the very end.


Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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Review #11, by ekroman ~One~

30th June 2010:
Great story. I really like the part where Remus seems a little embarrassed to be discovered :) very in character

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

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Review #12, by GinnyCullen ~One~

6th June 2010:
I laughed the whole way through. I could see this happening so very clearly.

Author's Response: Thanks ;) I had fun with this one, although I don't think it's my best work.

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Review #13, by phoenix5core ~One~

20th May 2010:
The only thing this story needs is a sequel...the twins can never match the mischief of the marauders though

Author's Response: Thank you! Well, the twins have only half their numbers ;) I'm sure if there were more of them, they could have outdone the Marauders. lol Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #14, by theelderwand ~One~

25th February 2010:

I'd love to hear their "later" conversation. What a great missing scene.

Darn, why didn't I write this? LOL.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm surprised JKR didn't write about this, actually :) I would have loved to see the twins finding out about MWP&P.

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Review #15, by 1917farmgirl ~One~

12th October 2009:
Hey, I missed this somehow in my first rampage through your fics! Glad I came back and found it. I love the idea of the twins finding out who the Mauraders are, so it was a treat to read your version. Thanks for letting me inhale your stuff these last few weeks. I'll come back and attack the longer stories when I'm not so busy with concerts and such! Great stuff!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the twins did find out who the Marauders were. I think they'd have gotten a kick out of it. Thanks for the review!

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Review #16, by DracoFall243 ~One~

12th September 2009:
Aww I loved this little one shot. To me it's kind of like one of those missing moments. Great work!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

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Review #17, by krissy87 ~One~

18th June 2009:
Ah, two more someones for Sirius Black to live vicariously through...isn't that what Hermione all but accused Sirius of doing- encouraging Harry to do dangerous things?

With Lupin and Sirius at close quarters a lot of the time, I can see that it would have been unfathomable that Fred and George would miss something like that.

Author's Response: Yeah, living vicariously. I think he would have been very happy that the twins had used the map for nefarious joke purposes for several years. He seemed to get on with them well. They must have found out who wrote the map, I think they would have been really impressed. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #18, by nire ~One~

29th April 2009:
Oh I loved this! :D
Even thought it's fairly short, I was smiling the whole time!
I loved Fred and Geroge's reactions when they heard them talking! And I loved that Sirius was all happy and mischeivious again. I always get sad when I remember that they all died. I know they are fictional, but it still saddens me :(

I like that Moony took on his prefect role and tried to stop Sirius from something that would be 'breaking the rules'.

It really was a great one-shot! :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I always wondered how they found out about the Map's authors. :)

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Review #19, by MoonNRoses ~One~

31st January 2009:
LOL... Very funny! I love it. Actually, there is a wonderful story I've read on here called "Confiscated and Highly Dangerous" by Touchstone. It describes how Fred and George first got the map. Very funny and entertaining!

I love how you made the twins look at them in awe and how Lupin is absolutely terrified of Molly's wrath. Then again, I don't blame him. She's a formidable woman.

Author's Response: I'll have to go read that one! I love Fred & George. I really wish we know how/when they found out that the map was written by a notorious criminal, their werewolf teacher, their brother's friend's dad, and their brother's rat. Thanks for the review!

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Review #20, by Georgia Weasley ~One~

20th October 2008:
That was hilarious. I loved the twins wanting to get the autographs of their heroes, once they'd discovered who they were. And as always, you write Molly perfectly. I almost feel sorry for the poor grindylow in the bathroom. Everyone is done spot on for character, of course. Lovely story. I don't know how I missed this one before!

Author's Response: Thanks! This is one of my least favorites, I put very little time into it, so I'm glad to hear it's entertaining at least :)

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Review #21, by SimplyStupified77 ~One~

14th October 2008:
haha i was laughing the whole time =) exactly what i expected their reactions to be! loved it haha 10/10!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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Review #22, by Joanne K ~One~

8th October 2008:
Interesting little one-shot. I always wondered if Fred and George ever found out who the Marauders were.

Your spelling and grammar were perfect, so well done in that respect.

I think it is good story idea, but I think you could have done a lot more with it. It was very short and to the point, but a lot more detail could have been added to make it more interesting.

The introduction was a little bland, perhaps work on creating an introduction that really pulls the reader into the story. It's such a short piece so you really want to draw the reader in right from the start.

I think you did a good job on your characterisation of Lupin and Sirius. Fred and George's characterisations were okay, but at times I felt as though they spoke younger than what they should be in this scene (afterall they are supposed to be seventeen).

I think it would have been nice if Sirius and Lupin reminisced a little on their creation of the map and if Fred and George went into more detail of how it came into their possession.

All in all though I thought it was a nice little "missing moment" fic.

Author's Response: I'm actually not that fond of this fic. I liked the idea, and I could almost picture the conversation in my head, but I really spent very little time on this. I wrote it while eating breakfast one morning and just sort of posted it without expanding on the idea, for a challenge. So, it's not very good. But thanks - I might go back to this one day. Thanks for reviewing, Joanne!

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Review #23, by misskay ~One~

7th June 2008:
haha i like this alot. it makes me smile!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #24, by Weregirl ~One~

1st June 2008:
Loved it..thanks for the laugh

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #25, by abhilasha ~One~

17th May 2008:
good effort but the reaction of the twins ws er.. nt enough 4 the circumstance..

Author's Response: Well thanks for reviewing, sorry you didn't like it.

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