so cute!
it is really great. i like your writing style.

i'd appreciate it if you'd check mine out.
thank you

Author's Response: thank you and I will be sure to check yours out

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This is a really good story. I would love to see where it's going. If you would be so kind, could you update soon?

Here is my favourite line:

... both to afraid to just follow their hearts.

It just made me feel something deep down. Keep up the good work. 10/10

~ BonnieWritter

Author's Response: Thanks hun, I will be adding the new chapter here this weekend, still working out some kinks in it but keep a look out. Thank again for the review!!!

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I have a suggestion, about your format. I'd much rather read a story with lots of spacing so I don't have to run my finger across the computer screen... Just a suggestion.

Author's Response: I will try to keep that in mind thanks for the review

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I can make you a banner. my email is japanesegurl@fsmail.net

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Author's Response: Thank you so much you have no idea how much that means to me. I have emailed you from my email address tnnightprincess@aol.com thanks again you are wonderful.

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I Love that last sentence! It's great!
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks I am glad you like it.

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please update soon. i really want to know what happens next and what lily wrote in the letter. please, please, update soon.

10/10. excellent job.

oh, did i mention i want you to update soon?

Author's Response: update is pending approval keep your eyes open for it, it should be approved in a day or two

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need to fix the following passage from somewhere in this chapter.

... he remembered thinking that she was and angel when she handed him his glasses that had fallen on the ground near her feet and gave him a small kiss on the cheek blushing before running away to go home.

i think it's supposed to be an angel. but i could be wrong.

so, good chapter. lily's house catching on fire is a pretty funny thought in my opinion. just as long as no one got hurt.

and what was that stick like thing you said moved. i don't understand.

keep up the good work. 10/10

Author's Response: thanks I will submit the change right away

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greatly appreciated as always to read a story such as this. it's very well written and pretty spot on in my opinion of what Lily's reaction to James coming head boy is.

i love it. keep up the good work.

10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reviews and your opinions on my story so far, to answer your question in the last review about the stick thing it's a walking stick or a stick bug at least that's what I call em I don't know what the actual name for them is but I have only seen them in certain parts of the north east.

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Hey, i love the story so far please udpate soon!!!

Author's Response: thanks so much for the review the newest chapter is pending approval should be up soon

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Please keep going! I REALLY want to know the next part to your story!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review, I will have chapter 4 posted very soon so keep an eye out for it, I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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i love the start of this great story. i can't wait to read more of it. please add another chapter soon. 10/10

Author's Response: thanks so much for the review, new chapter being uploaded today

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Brill start it sets the scene really well lol
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Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I really appreciate your support.

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I love your intro, I like the way you don't dwell on the facts that we already know. Even if you'll eventually have to discribe them I prefer story that don't introduce every detail right at the beggining!

Author's Response: thank you very much for the review, I am glad you liked it.

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