Wow, I thought it was awesome :) Report Review
Love it! Who does she kiss though? Report Review
I liked it but other stories with Lily in it have her playing Quidditch Report Review
aaww i thought this was really sweet!!
will there be any other chapters? or maybe another story building up to this scene?
and who is the guy??
anyway good job i loved it!! Report Review
kaleigh you know what i want for my birthday? a book about me and how amazing i am cause you are an amazing little girl you know that? you should become an authorAuthor's Response: aww thanks. ill, er, get right started on that... Report Review
that was a very sweet story. it was very cute. it was well written. Good job.Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
Pretty good. Nice writing style.
I'll volunteer for beta-reading- I've never edited for anyone other than myself, but I'm obsessive about typos, so I think I'd be pretty good. email@example.comAuthor's Response: Thank you soooo much umm i will email you when i get home with whatever i can think of that you should know :DDDD Report Review
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