Whoop! I'm so glad someone made a story about Petunia being magical! I always thought something like that might happen. Hooray for you, you're on my favs! Report Review
Look, the plot is great, the fic is fun, intruiging and interesting to read, but the chapters are way too short for me... Report Review
It's okay, but tehre's a couple of grammar mistakes here and there...otherwise, it's pretty good! ~*Hayzel Report Review
this storys going great. cant wait for you to update i like how it jumped right in to action well cya p.s. think bout harry becoming an animagus like a griffin (lion with wings an golden hair) Report Review
Are you going to continue? I want you to continue. Report Review
Keep it up! i really like this story. Report Review
this story is awsome. I highly encourage you to write more than you have about how harry knew about Lestrange Report Review
Great story!!!!! Plz update!!!!!! Report Review
Hey, well done! For your first fic, you are doing brilliantly. It\'s certainly action-packed, and you have good ideas. Looking forward to seeing more...keep writing! If you have time, could you r/r my fic \'The Last Marauder\'? Thanks a lot. Report Review
hey, interesting story so far, keep writing! I\'m anxious to read more! Report Review
yo man good job, I can\'t wait to hear more. The only problemo is that you made the action go by too fast and the chapters were too short, anyway its really good, Cliffhanger!!! Report Review
Please run your chapters through a spell checker and get a beta reader fast! Other than that the plot is ok. Report Review
Execellent way of removing Harry from Privet Drive! I can personally never write good Harry at the Dursley\'s stuff. Report Review
llllllllllllllooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeee,it contnue or else*holds wand to throat*, cassie,a.k.a padfoot Report Review
i do hope you continue its getting good, cassie a.k.a padfoot, p.s can you review my story, \"glitteration,\"its a romance between lily and james,thanks Report Review
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