this was beautiful :') Report Review
I love this song so I was excited to read this and I wasn't disappointed. Brilliant :) Report Review
This was absolutely amazing. I don't have any words to describe it. I love the Tom you've put down, he's so evil but yet he is still able to love a girl -even if he doesn't want to admit it.
Keep up the great work! 10/10 Report Review
If I say anything about this story then I won't be doing it justice, so all I'm going to do is leave a rating.
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~Luna xAuthor's Response: Thankyou sooo much!!!!
I was really worried about writing that one to be honest :) x Report Review
i luv it
it well good man
i can't believe moldy voldy
what a meanyAuthor's Response: xD hahahaha!! Thanks! :) xx Report Review
Well, it would CERTAINLY be impossible to say that you're a crap writer! This is very well-done from both a technical and imaginative point of view. I've picked one of your longer stories as my "favorite of the day" and will begin reviewing it tomorrow. I do want to point out that a number of your pieces seem to be unfinished WIPs. I hope the story I have chosen doesn't share that fate. :=(Author's Response: Yeah, three of them are new though, so don't worry :) the other isn't very good, and I've jused updated chapter ten... I don't like it ^_^ Thanks so much for the review! x Report Review
melodramatic story, but very well written. i am so going to read your other stories!Author's Response: thanks >. Report Review
I am reposting my review because evidently hpff finds it offensive if there is a curse word in a review...blah...
I am honestly.so impressed and just...shocked...and amazed. This is just wow.
I started reading this because I like your story Contrast and thought I should read another story by you...and although it is EXTREMELY hard to believe Voldemort loving someone...the way you explained everything and moved the story along while weaving in truths that we know, like his hate for muggle and 'mudbloods' and halfbreeds, the hate of his birth name, how he doesn't feel (or tries not to in the case of this story), and MOST of all how he fears death.
Its so crazy because just as I thought maybe, wow, I could feel a TINY bit of sympathy for this psycho (when he feels remorse after his hasty decision to kill her--though it seems like he must have come close before as she knowns exactly about his 'strength and weakness speal'), and then he kills the muggle and thinks immediatly that he never wants to be dead and that he must get back to making horcruxes.
SO unbelievably perfect! Honestly...I'm impressed because just when I felt that maybe Voldemort was getting a bit too mushy, he would transform into the dark and horrid character that I know all too well from the books. The contrast yet similiarities of him at night and him as his usual dark self are haunting and well written, great job.
I LOVE how the girl's name he possibly loved is not mentioned. It makes it seem like she could have been important, but she wasn't because Voldemort didn't let her be-- he turned her into just another one of his murder victims, SO so crazy and amazing.
The fact that he SO badly did not want to love and that he actually killed a person he might have loved in this story, and that love is eventually part of his downfall is so ironic because he viewed love as weakness (partly in this story to go against Dumbledore).
I am just honestly so impressed and this story is definitely going in my favorites (I think the fact that I sat here and stared at the computer with my mouth open and eyes watering for a minute or so after I read it definitely merritts it a spot in the fav stories list! hehe!).
(I didn’t want anything from her – nothing I did was for any personal gain; just her presence calmed me and the stress of being away from her was astounding.)
(“The pictures. Why aren’t they moving?” I knew the answer. I knew the answer. I just didn’t want it to be true.)- Woah. instense. I love his disgust with anything muggle. Well I don't love his digust...but instead how it comes out within the story.
Again--awesome job! This story was intense and well written and just so well developed :)
-quidditch77Author's Response: Wow. What an amazing review. I'm like... chuffed now xD
You actually caught on to almost every little thing I tried to convey in the one-shot. I'm actually very surprised, and grinning like a fool xD
Thank you for the amazing, amazing review and I'm reaaally glad you liked Contrast :) x Report Review
No, you're not a crap writer :) I really liked this! Voldy's characterization was perfect and I loved how you showed his emotions (or lack of them). I was shocked when he killed her, but then he is the Dark Lord..the order of the phoenix (which does not deserve capital letters): hehe, that was brilliant. It was great how he hated himself for loving her and the descriptions were amazing.
10/10. going into the favourites :)Author's Response: Thankyou so, so much ^_^ Oooh I'm like chuffering now :P xox Report Review
Wow, this was really good.Author's Response: Thanks so much!! ^_^ x Report Review
Wow this was intense! The beginning made me a little dizzy because he kept going back and forth, back and forth - is it love? is it weakness? what do I want? what should I do? - but I think it was also very effective because it shows the one time in his life that Voldemort is uncertain! I think he is the type of person who always knows exactly what he is doing, and this was the one exception. I absolutely loved this idea: "There is not love and hate; only strength and weakness." It is very VERY Tom Riddle - exactly the kind of philosophy he would have about people. I love that he considered this girl only his weakness, that he didn't even hesitate to deny that it was love. Poor guy :( I really like the incorporation of Slytherin's locket around his neck - it's almost like a talisman that reminds him about his pureblood mania and won't allow him to break through the prejudice. It was really scary when he touched it and remembered what he was doing, and then killed her and tried to forget her. Very sad and well-written. I really enjoyed it, you did a great job!Author's Response: Thanks so, so much (: I wish I coulod extend this... but I can't, I guess. This is kind of all it needs... an extention would kill it lol. Thanks so much for the review - I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
A great story, just wish that it was longer :P telling more about their so called "love"... :)Author's Response: I don't think there was any need for an expansion on it, to be honest. Nothing more to say really - just a one-off one-shot. I'm tempted to write another one-shot, which would be it's sequel, but I'm not sure yet... Thanks for the review! x Report Review
it was so... real... *gasps*
you're an amazing writer, not a crap! ;)
I don't think I've ever read anything so reallistic about Voldemort.. wonderful. ^_^Author's Response: Thanks so much ^_^
Really? I thought it might have been harder to believe... but oh okay xD awesome. Thanks so so much!! Edenn xx Report Review
that was a really cool, i could actually see Voldemort doing something like that, it really seemed possible for me...very nice. I enjoyed it.(and your NOT a crap writer your a good writer)Author's Response: Thanks so much ^_^ Report Review
Wow, that was great. I'm not normally the type of person to read something like this, but it was just so amazing and raw emotion in parts. Go you!!!
10/10Author's Response: Thankyou So Much :) I Just Fancied Writing Something Utterly Random >. Report Review
How very quaint? Very original and intriguing! I loved the complexity, the emotions, the passion. I know this is a crappy review but it is the middle of the night (insomnia - aghhh!) so this is the best I can muster!
Many thanks, Becky xAuthor's Response: No it's a great review. I'm glad you liked it :) Thankyouu xx Report Review
that was good and certainly interestingAuthor's Response: Thankyou :) Eee Happifulness. Edenn x Report Review
OMG! So sad that poor girl. now Tom cannot deny that love exits...(well i gues he can cause he obliviated himself!) gosh so frustrating. I hate him so.Author's Response: Can't help but go awhh ^_^ though
Ty for the review ^_^ Edenn x Report Review
Ow, my heart hurts, that was so sad.
LadySoftballAuthor's Response: Oh ty ty so much ^_^
I'm glad you liked it :)
Edenn (: x Report Review
I'm definately not going to review to say you're a crap writer, because you're not!
I loved that, it was absoloutely amazing. Voldemort/tom is so hard to write(for me anyway.) and you did it beautifully. I actually found myself SYMPATHISING with him. ugh. That was a little scary...
You had great imagery and characterization. Me, being someone who would like to write a tom/voldemort fic, but doesn't know how to approach it. It was great to read this and see how you did it, and how you set the scene. It was beautiful and I loved it. A farvourite for sure. :)
RoseAuthor's Response: Thank you so much ^_^ You have no idea how much that meant to me. Ty ty ty!! xx Report Review
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