aweee!! that was so cute!! i LOVED it!! you are an AMAZING fan fiction Author!!! keep writing!!!

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hhahahah!!



“Ok mate, I’ve got an idea, let’s make a bet”, Sirius said as he thought.

“What’s in it for me”, James asked curiously.

Sirius immediately smirked, his grey eyes shinning, “My Beatles record”.

“What, the muggle band I love”

“All yours if you bet with me”.

“I’m in what is it”.

“You’ve got to become really close friends with Evans and not fall for her, as prove too see if you’re really over her”, Sirius stated making his voice clear, “If you loose you’ll have to run naked threw the castle”.

“You’re going down Padfoot, this is going to be a piece of cake”.

“Let the games begin”.

that made me laugh!! i LOVED the chapter!!

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hahaha!! OMG

“Hey Lily’s could we play actor someday, it sounds like a fun sport”, Adeline said happily.

Elle and Lily felt hopeless, Hailey just stared.

“I don’t think so Addie”.

that made me laugh!! I LOVED IT!!!

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WOW!! it was like a Soap Opera! that was deffinatly enough Drama for me!! sorry but i HATE Annabell!! I am also the kind of girl who likes it when things are happy all the time!! but its all good!! i LOVED the chapter, minus Annabell!!

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awee!!! that was cute!! I LOVED IT!! IT WAS AHMAZING!!

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AMAZING CHAPTER!! loved it!! keep writing!! it is making me smile! :)

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Aweee!! that was a cute chapter!! i really liked it!! you are an amazing fan fic author!! keep writing!! :D

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I LOVED IT!!! it was AMAZING!! it made me smile!!! :D

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I like it. It's quite funny. I like the whole Mimi thing. Maybe you could put in a few Marauder Pranks?

I think it needs a bit of editing, so things like when James says "We should change it to Hailey got hit by a ball." should be more like this "We should change it to 'Hailey got hit by a ball'."
Maybe find a beta? That would make it easier to read. I would also suggest adding more description. Anyway, it's good.

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Nooo! Don't drop it! I'm reading it and I want more!!

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no, don't give up!!!
they're really good- excellant in fact!

Author's Response: Really?yey!cofidece boost!thanks!LOL

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Great job so far! Update ASAP. But you have so many spelling errors...

Author's Response: thanks!i know i suck at grammar!LOL

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I love this story!!! But you should work on your punctuation.

Author's Response: thank you!i most admit i love reviews!and my puntuaction is bad,but it's all getting worked on!:D

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