Oh wow. This story is AMAZING!! I love it so much. It's great. My jaw just dropped while reading it. I'm definately excited to read more.

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I suppose we will find out more about Avrille's past, such as how she managed to break past Sev's defenses when even Voldemort couldn't.

Author's Response: Hi, thankyou so much for reviewing! Don't worry, there is so much about Avrille that I am DYING to spill!! I won't leave you in the dark :)
Astrid

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A girl that can do wandless magic good enough to best Severus? Hmm . . .very interesting. And just how old is she?

Author's Response: Hi again, thanks for reviewing! All will be revealed :) this story has been my baby for so long and I can't wait to share it with everyone! It's taking awhile to get my chapter validated so I apologise for the wait. I hope you keep reading and enjoy!
Astrid

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This is a good story so far. However, it would be better if you used correct punctuation. To show speech, you use quotation marks ("), not apostrophes ('). You did use language appropriate to the characters' ages, though, which is more than I can say for some authors.

Excellent story! :)

Author's Response: Hi, thankyou so much for your review! I'm glad you like the story, I'm so excited about it. And thanks about the quotation marks, I didn't realise. I hope you keep reading and enjoy!!
Astrid

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