{reviewid: 2087385, reviewer: 'Lauren'}
2nd April 2009:
More... Please. I love the idea of him taking her mom out. Hope to see an update soon!!
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{reviewid: 1961023, reviewer: 'Brainygeek233'}
11th October 2008:
SUPER funny, love it a lot. Can't wait for the next chappie, post soon!!
10/10
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{reviewid: 1897179, reviewer: 'gitgit'}
16th April 2008:
ahahhahaha i love it
i cant wait to read mrs evans response to the letter and i really cant wait to see how lily will react to the letter... now this is getting very interesting cant wait to read the next chapter ... you did an awsome job :D
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{reviewid: 1883228, reviewer: 'EvasiveEcho'}
2nd April 2008:
You have to continue this! I'll track you down if you don't!
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{reviewid: 1860967, reviewer: 'sammy%20lupin'}
11th March 2008:
i'm really surprised to say this, but i really like your story.
i'm usually very picky about the james/lily romances i read, but your brilliant title sparked my interest and i couldn't help but read.
i loved the line where James says 'when i'm read to let go.' it's original, and it progresses the story to the letter; which was written marvelously, it was brilliant and very- believable, i guess is the word i'm looking for.
your story was hilarious, even though i usually don't prefer this sort of comedy.
job well done and i await anxiously on your next chapter.
9/10
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{reviewid: 1818932, reviewer: 'BluEyedAngel'}
4th February 2008:
Intriguing! I'm interested to see where this goes.
There's a few little things that need editing. Look for things the spellchecker wouldn't notice, such as "had" instead of "hard."
Good luck!
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{reviewid: 1812840, reviewer: 'Gemma'}
30th January 2008:
Nonsense...I happen to think the letter, as well as the chapter is absoutely brilliant! I can't wait to read more!!
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{reviewid: 1812672, reviewer: 'thediarywithin'}
30th January 2008:
I love it. Way to go the letter is great and i can see James writing such of a letter.
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{reviewid: 1812650, reviewer: 'x_mad4sirius_x'}
30th January 2008:
hahahaha Omg this is soo cute
Maddie
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{reviewid: 1812632, reviewer: 'Bluebelle'}
30th January 2008:
That last line made me smile. :)
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{reviewid: 1812608, reviewer: 'zEthHPfrEaK'}
30th January 2008:
I love this story! It's great, I love the letter to Lily's mum!
Update soon?
you know.. it just about amazing to have TWO/THREE reviews on the first chapter. the most I've seen were 1...
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{reviewid: 1812436, reviewer: 'JamesBlackPower'}
30th January 2008:
Wow That is a great story! It is very funny!
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{reviewid: 1812415, reviewer: 'padfoot4ever'}
30th January 2008:
This was great! Love the humour and you did a great job on the letter
Looking forward to more! (",)
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