i love this chapter so much. the little fight of Harry and Ginny made me laugh. it was hilarious. what's going to happen now? will u update soon please?^_^
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wow! i wasn't expecting Ginny to change herself. awesome chapter u have here.^_^
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great start 4 the 1st chapter.^_^
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omg love love loved it!! =)
please please update son!!
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Thestral seeing shouldn't be a delightful occation. I would have imagined she would have broken down into tears all the way back to the castle.
otherwise. Harry has the hint now. time to turn the tables?Author's Response: well,in my opinion,ginny is somewhat a very strong character and would not be that scared when facing the thestral.in ootp,she had rode a thestral before,obviously (to me) she would be fascinated by its appearance.and also,in the subject care of magical creatures,she would surely have known that thestrals were gentle creatures.
but thanks for the review anyway...:) and i know different people have different perspectives.. Report Review
the chapter is good.actually the story is itself good.Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
Hi. I love it. I can not bevllie that Harry will said that to Ginny. It will be a longtime Ginnywill fall in love w/Harry again. U know u should u should get a boyfriend to Ginny and get harry jourls lol. ~Jackie~ 100-100.Author's Response: hi!i'm currently writing the next chap and can't wait to publish it real soon.
hm...i'll think about ur suggestion...thx for the review!;) Report Review
Yeah, it seems a little incomplete. Please finish the chapter soon.Author's Response: yup!i'm adding the final touches... Report Review
An interesting chapter...
Would like to see some more depth in Ginny, not just anger.
Nicely writtenAuthor's Response: hi!don't worry...ginny's anger won't be for long... Report Review
ok, can i just say (before i go onto the proper review!) that it is really annoying that you are changing the story chapters' plot after posting the chapters originally as something different.
You see, i saw that chapter 3 was up, and so went to read, but i was really confused by why Ginny was blonde, almost thinking, surely you know she's got red hair, and wouldnt make that huge mistake! so feeling that i maybe missed a chapter, i read back over chapter 2, (though i was confused as id left a review on it) to find that you had completely changed it, adding loads of new stuff that made the third chapter now make sense.
but, i had another confusion; what is all this about the veritadesire and georges jokes, and what about percy? i didnt know he was treaching! so i read back over chapter one, only to find that that had also been completely added to and changed, thus making the whole thing make sense! but i had no idea before reading 3 that you had re worked the story, so became really confused.
you also said at the beginning of chapter 3 that you hadnt finished with it yet and would be updating it soon. does that mean that il have to re-read chapter 3 as well?
Do you see now why i ask that you dont do this? it just results in confusion... either make sure you have the chapter as you want it before posting (even if it means the readers have to wait a bit longer) or say clearly in the main story summary that we need to re read the whole thing as it has changed! That way there is no confusion...
Anyways, now that i have got that out of the way, i shall review the new plot! and i have to tell you that i think it is fantastic!! i really do! i love how george tricked them into behaving as their heart desired using his veritadesire or whatever it is called! and i love how ginny's character has been affected by all the leaving out she has had to go through, though i think changing her hair blonde is a bit ott! still, you show that she has grown up over the course of the war and its aftermath, and that she wants to be appreciated as her own, strong person. I like how she and harry are not together straight away, that makes the plot more interesting, and also unique! i also like how bill and percy are teaching... though something tells me that with a wife and kid at home Bill wouldnt want to teach away at hogwarts (though i suppose its a better settled job than his gringotts one!) and that percy would rather stay at the ministry, despite his character changing for the better over the war... still, apart from that it is a great idea! and fits this fanfiction perfectly! :D
So yeah, am loving it, and cant wait to see what happens next! but PLEASE make it clearer next time we need to re-read a chapter to have the story make sense, and dont go making huge changes once the chapters are posted...
Rose ;)Author's Response: hi rose!before anything i wanna say sorry!!!it's not that i am purposely doing it...ok,next time i will listen to you.finish up the story first before publishing it.thanks so much for giving me advices and tips...
really appreciate it!
btw,i am glad that you like the story! Report Review
that was wonderful. I loved this chapter. keep up the great work.Author's Response: thanks! Report Review
Hi. I love it. I can nto bevllie that Ginny have blond hair. When is chapter coming?? I hope that Ginny and Harry will be together again. I can not what of chapter 3 to read it lol. "I must get my Ginny back. I must get my Ginny back!" Harry pleded sitently without being aware that he was being watched by a blonde haried girl, who was trying to hold her own tears herselft. UPDATE R.S.P. ~Jackie~ hugs kiss. 100-100.Author's Response: hello there!chap 3 is being validated...;)
thanks for reading and reviewing!
Brilliant! enjoying the peaved Ginny. Would like to have a little background on what Ginny learned over the summer from her great aunt. Seems that she is setting the trio up for a lesson in witches payback. Or Ginny is more powerful than we first thought. And she has some surprises set up for the school year?
(Just want to point out one thing. Your making obvious spelling errors. Alot of them. Your just dropping the last letter off from a word.)
Keep up the great work.Author's Response: Hi! i might not noticed the errors there.will be great if u could point out the spelling errors the next time u review...hehe
btw,thanks for the review!:) Report Review
Wow...you packed a lot into this chapter.
Nicely writtenAuthor's Response: thanks dear!hope u will continue reading this story...:) Report Review
It was Very good. I wish it was longer, but you seem to have a pattern, short and sweet chapters. Cute how Luna and Neville go together. A few of your word choices were a bit odd, but for the most part your grammar was decent. I hope you update ASAP! Love where the story is going, we are getting to see a different side of Ginny in a way. Keep up the good work!Author's Response: hello!thx for the review!:)
yeah,i'll update soon...i promise Ginny's character will be more interesting...
cheers! Report Review
Pretty good. Kind of slow but has the makings of a great story.Author's Response: hi there!yeah, i like things slow and steady..and it's my first story here and i m trying my best to produce a better work.glad u like it!
cheers! Report Review
fantastic chapter!!! i absolutely LOVED it!! right from the start with the wonderful writing about ginny's daydreaming of harry! and neville and luna are so sweet!! i cant see why rowling dismissed the pairing, they go really well! and you wrote luna's character absolutely perfectly! well done!! i really cant wait to read more! update soon!!!
Rose :)Author's Response: hey rose!yeah,i'm working on it and i'm having my holidays now...it'll be published real soon! :) Report Review
hello! you reviewed my story so nicely, and added me to your fav author list, that i thought i'd return the favour! :D and i LOVE these types of stories, of ginny's 7th year/the trio's 8th, and what happens after the war! and you have started it extremely well in a different way to others, which is good, btw, with ginny staying at muriels and then going to the platform to meet everyone to board the train! and i liked how you switched from talking about Ginny to talking about the weasleys and harry, nice and smoothly all within the one chapter. your descriptions, also, were lovely to read, and you write with a nice, flowing style in general that i can see will develop wonderfuly as the story goes on! There were only a few things i noticed, spelling was one of them, you may want to go through and check... also there were a couple of places where i was confused as to who you were talking about. and if you could make the chapters longer that would be fantastic, but if not, dont worry, its the quality not the quantity that counts, and you have quality! :D
So yeah, great job!! i look forward to more! update soon!!!
Rose :)Author's Response: hey rose!thx for your review..ya i noticed the spelling errors too but typing this story is making me excited and didn't check it twice.:P
this is my first time writing,so some plots may be confusing...but i'll work on it!:)
Aww! This seems like a cute story. I take it Harry and Ginny didn't get back together right away? Great Job!Author's Response: yup!i find it more interesting that they don't get back too soon you know...hehe btw,i've edited this chap a little,so please read on Report Review
Hi. I love it. I'm going to add this to my fav. Why did Gin want to her great aunt's house?Is Harry Ginny together? 10-10.Author's Response: hey!yup i've explained a little about why Gin was at Muriel's place.i edited this chap a little,plz read on Report Review
Interesting start to this fic.
Nicely done...keep it up!Author's Response: thanks!btw,i edited this chap a little plz read on... Report Review
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