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Review #1, by searching17 Lightning

26th October 2008:
Wow this was really deep and emotional. I liked the way you described Rose Weasley and her passion and her emotions. And at the end, the lone two words "Scorpius Malfoy" really made me smile. He wrote all those wonderful and beautiful things about Rose. :] It's so sweet.

I must also admire the structure of your story - it's unique in something I've never come across in HPFF - You did not entirely double-spaced, but it is not single-spaced either. Is it 1.5 spaced? Because it helps the reader so much to read the story. It was a brilliant choice.

Anyway, a very touching and good one-shot from Scorpius's Point of View. 10/10.


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Review #2, by xlilyx Lightning

1st February 2008:
wow that was... (i cant think of a word right now lol) your writing style is great and even though it was short it got the point accross. well done. i look forward to reading more of this. please update soon


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Review #3, by Rain_Melody Lightning

31st January 2008:
Very shory, but your style is absolutely lovely! Good job!

Author's Response: Thank you! I know it is short- I needed to characterize Scorpius as a short-worded, yet very loquatious individual. Rose's Obituary was perfect for this. If you or anyone else is interested, I plan on writing a story to back this one-shot up. I just wanted to keep this simple because it is my first story, but thank you again for the positive review.

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