Well, you succeeded, I laughed my ass of. Thank you :D

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hahahha!! OMG!! that made me laugh!! I LOVED it!!

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Pretty bloody hilarious.

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Cute,
i am not sure that i would consider it humourless
but rolling on the floor laughing, never made it there.
I hope to read more of your work later.

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James and Fred were performing a disturbing version of “Fergalicious.”
“As to who spiked the juice,” Neville continued seriously, as if the parents around had not just witnessed their children acting like a babbling bumbling band of baboons

i lurved those lines! so bloody funny, you shoudl really do more of this stuff. while i don't like Lily/Scorpius, i still reckon its bloody awesome. :) :) :) 10/10 and im favouriting

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not a Lily/Scorpius either, so this was fun(: I appreciate the review!

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U r really a very good author!! I loved it! It was really very good!!!

10/10

Oh yeah, I had a great laugh too!!!

Moving on to more of ur fics!!

Cheers!
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Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

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This was very good.I like Rose/Scorpius more but I also like him with Lily

Author's Response: Thanks! I prefer Rose/Scorpius as well. :)

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you definitely complete your goal in making me laugh. for a first fanfic that was awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much. :):)

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hahah awesome story/dream, its funny to dream about drunk people isn't it? my favourite part of the story was the scorpius/rose kissing conversation
-i've never kissed a girl before
-well i've never kissed a boy
-thats lame, lets kiss now
haha so cute, love it
10/10
Veela_is_me

Author's Response: Dreams are so much fun, usually. :) Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the review!

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love it!! very funny

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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funy storry :)
i love it as always :)

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

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That was excellent! I loved it. 10/10 easily=D

Author's Response: Thank you!

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ha. pretty funny.
u could of sone a bit more with the story line, dont u think?
and, have u noticed that you always start your authors response with 'haha'?
lol.
good story.

Author's Response: Haha, yes, actually. I have. I refuse to say lol, and haha is my substitute. Thanks for the review! :)

I always use smileys as well. Did you notice that?

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coolies!!! write more lily/scorpius fanfiction! den i dunno... i'll be singing i luv u rae of sunshine! peace to u or wateva... weird rite... anyway great fanfiction do more lily scorpius

Author's Response: Haha, I don't know. I'm definitely a Scorose shipper. :)

Feel free to sing anyway.

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awe it had been cute and funny i liked it. never seen a lily/ scorpius before so its new. it reminded me a little of alice and wonderland anyvays good job and keep it up!

Author's Response: Haha, Alice in Wonderland. I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you for the review!

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i definitly laughed and laughed! it was frreakin hilarious. i thought the ending was the best, even though i am more of a rose/scorpious shipper myself. but still great job!

Author's Response: Haha, me too! But I'm glad you found it funny! :)

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NOOO!
But Lily-Jacob-what happened?
NO!
Ha, good fic.
Just hyperventalating a little.
In, out, in, out.

Author's Response: Haha, I wrote this before Stargazing. Keep breathing. It's okay. I promise.

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Fantastic. Bloody Brillantly Fantastic.

I don't think I have to say I loved it, because it's kind of obvious, but I will anyway. I loved it. It was funny, I laughed out loud so many times, and Lily/Scorpius is just amazingly adorable. I love it. Oh and the part about them trying to come up with an excuse to leave the platform was so funny. James doing homework, hah. And the kiss between Rose and Scorpius when they were seven was so cute - even though we didn't get to see it - but I loved that it ended with Lily/Scorpius. Oh and Lily drunk, oh god that was just too amusing. I'm just rambling right now, but I loved it. I really did.

Author's Response: Haha, rambling is okay. I do it constantly. people are always asking me if I have a point. I'm like, "Well, I did . . . I think . . ."

Anyway, I'm so glad you liked the whole thing. I thought the Rose/Scorpius kiss was kind of funny as well, as it gave me an amusing mental picture.

Thanks for the review!

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Funniest thing I've ever read, definitley. I loved it, especially the Wrackspurt!

Author's Response: haha, thank you! Those darn wrackspurts, I say!

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This was soo funny!
I loved it!
I love Lilly and Scorpius Fics a'lot and this was short but cutely funny! I hope you'll write more later!
The drunken scene was hiliarius!

Author's Response: I'm actually not a big Lily/Scorpius fan, but I just couldn't help myself, so alas, it was written. Thanks for the review!

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that happened in your dream?

Lol, great story. I love dreams, especially when theyre crazy.

"Queen Sexy Lily".

LOL.

Author's Response: Haha, I have great dreams. :) Thanks for the review!

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THAT WAS SIMPLY HILARIOUS!lol i loved it

Author's Response: Haha, thanks so much!

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Hi, this is Bedazzled from TDA. When I made that chapter image for you, I couldn't help being intrigued about your story. I gathered it was funny and I love to laugh. So I clicked on the link and read this one-shot. And I was right. It DID make me laugh. This one-shot was delightfully refreshing and the senselessness of it made it really original and funny. I quite liked the end too. Happy ending *sigh* I am a fan of Scorpius/Lily *giggles* Great job :D

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! For some reason, I love it when you amazing artists read the stories you design graphics for; I don't know why. I'm glad its pointlessness made you laugh. As I always say, I aim to amuse. :D Also, have I mentioned how lovely my chapter image is?

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Haha that's quite some dream you had:)

Author's Response: Oh, yes it was. You have no idea. :)

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wow

youre seriuosly the best author in the history of ever!

realli - if i were i guy i'd propose right now

ok that was an awkward statement *looks embarassed*

but realli - youre amazing

"this thirty-ninth day of November-"






“It’s the ninth of December, Lily!”"


LOL X 1020328492384979402308398430!

Author's Response: Oh, wow, I've never gotten that compliment before! But don't worry; I've given it several awkward times! Thanks so much for the mildly alarming and very make-me-cheery review!

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