I think having Rodolphus as your main character is quite original. We know some things about him but not too many. It's interesting that you make him run away from the battle. It would be interesting to see how he remembers Bella's closenest to the Dark Lord.
It definitely intrigues me, so yes, I will come back to read more when you update.Author's Response: Thank you! Making Rodolphus run was actually the big debate in my mind, but I decided this worked best. Actually, Bella's Voldy-obsession is hat inspired this fic, lol. I'm glad you're interested, your review makes me want to get back on the next chapter right now lol! Report Review
Not bad. I'd give this chapter a 7 out of 10 but it's too soon for judgement. Can't wait for the next one!Author's Response: Thanks! I've already started the next one, but Lucius and Cissy are giving me trouble...hopefully i'll finish it soon...thanks for the review! Report Review
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