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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DeathMakesArtists But Where's your Heart?

25th May 2008:
Oh goodie, we found out some more. The whole alchemy business sounds really interesting, there's so many options to it! Update soon ^^

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Review #2, by DeathMakesArtists Now I know, That I can't make you stay.

25th May 2008:
An okay introduction chappie, though I wish we'd found out just a liiitle bit more about Ria. She seems like an interesting character (yay for black converse! ^^), just be careful not to go over the top and turn her into a Mary Sue. :) *clicks the next chappie button*

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Review #3, by Luna_fan16 Now I know, That I can't make you stay.

28th January 2008:
i want to read more i like the beginning when are you gonna write more?

Author's Response: THNX A LOT FOR THE COMMENT.... i don't know when I am going to try as soon as possible..but school and homework hates me so....;p

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