I really enjoyed this! You did a great job bringing to life a unique story. I was sad to learn that Harry died while killing Voldemort, but Ginny is getting married!
I really liked how you made Hermione a Healer instead of working at the Ministry. I thought it was a good choice for her to do something different. I also liked how Draco, though he is who he is still aspired to be something completely different. I liked the descriptions though they were subtle, they worked well.
I am highly intrigued to find out what else is going to happen. Keep up the awesome writing!! =)
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wow, this is good
so good i went and made a banner for it =D
if you want to see my banner go to www.photobucket.com
your username is: lifeasweknowit_2008
your password is: dramione
i hope you like it! if you don't wanna use it it's ok.
xxx silver_and_gold Report Review
Hey, so when do you plan on finishing and posting the next chapter? You can't just leave it like that. I'll go crazy!!! Well crazier than I am already. Plz finish soon. I'm begging you.-gets down on knee's- PLEASE. PLEASE.
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haha i love this movie its so funny and preity zinta looked so pretty in it. Report Review
BETTER THAN THE FIRST. IN FACT QUITE GOOD ,IF I MAY SAY SO. Report Review
IT'S ALRIGHT !I THINK YOU CAN DO MUCH BETTR THAN THIS . CARRY ON ,DEAR. Report Review
Okay I know this is harsh, but I have just read the first paragraph of this story, and let me be very frank when I say that I don't care for your style of writing. I like the summary of the story which caught my attention, but your sentances were WAY too choppy.Once again sorry if its harsh, but i know that I'd perfer people to tell me if they think my story was bad. Not that your story was bad, but I also read your reviews...you're coping it from a movie? I'm sorry, but to me a fanfic should be all about your own imagination, and what you think of relationships and senarios. Not that inspiration isn't a good thing, but to plain out copy the storyline? That is a bit much. Thank you for your review by the way on my story. Highly appreciated. Good luck to you on your first story, I will continue to read but, only because you reviewed mine. Once again sorry if that sounds harsh, but I am a BIG critic and I love writing.Author's Response: that was a tad bit harsh, not to mention i stopped writing because of this tad but harsh review.
uhh i just wanted to make a dramione out of the story. ill add my imagination so dont worry.
But this story is officially abandonded. Report Review
i knews you got it off salaam namaste, the summary was so familiar!!! its not funni, but it sounds so good, cant wait 4 more!!! Report Review
OMG. I thought it was that movie when I read the summary. Lolz, remember when she decorated the house and was standing behind him with a knife and a mask? Lolz. Anyways. I LOVE your story, update soon!!
**priyahh**Author's Response: hehe THANK YOU! :D :D Report Review
Cool work! Does the banner link still not work? 10/10 for the chapter by the way!Author's Response: Thanx! No im sorry the banner no working :( Report Review
Ooo! I like it so far. The pirates reference adds humor. Please update soon!Author's Response: Cool Thanks! I did get nervous when adding that part it :D Report Review
Once again really good can't wait till chapter 3Author's Response: Once again, Thank You! Report Review
amazing! This is really good so far.Author's Response: Thank You! Report Review
Cool first chapter! If you'd like a banner, e-mail me at: email@example.com and I'll be in touch :)Author's Response: oooh wow thanks!!! Report Review
oK hang on.
r u indian?
thats a movie in india...
oh ur sooo busted.
.Author's Response: well no i am not busted. 'cause i disclaimed it ;) Report Review
heyy that was real good
i cant wait for more ^.^
a y e s H aAuthor's Response: ooooh Thanx Ayesha! Report Review
Its good so far, i would looove to see more...and let me tell you...Draco would make an excellent chef! I cant wait!Author's Response: Yeah! I thought the same! Please read on it might be to your liking! Report Review
This is really good so far...I LOVED IT!Author's Response: Wow. ANd its my first. Thanx! Report Review
this reminds me of a indian movie i saw.i like the chapter...keep up the good workAuthor's Response: Ha! This is an Indian movie i copied! Cool that you know. I hope its ok if i continue! Report Review
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