AWW I liked it! Good job.. The only thing is that lily and James knew each other like there whole hogwarts life... I talked about it in bool five.. But I still really loved the story and I can't wait for the next chapter.. *Claps and lots of cookies* -Charly

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I know i goofed on that, I didn't want to start the story their first year, but i also wanted to show Lily liking James when she first meets him. Other than that i'm trying super hard to make it as accurate as I can. Well, keep an eye out for the next chapter! it should be out soon :) and thanks again for reviewing.

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I love this story; it is slightly different from the Harry Potter series, but I'm still enjoying your story. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm almost done with the next chapter. I guess i took a little break from all my stories for awhile, but im back and should be posting the next chapter in a week or so. Keep an eye out!

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Oh my gosh, you should really add more to this story. It is very well written!

Author's Response: i'm glad you think that! I'll post the next chapter soon...hopefully.

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Intersting start..
I really want to read more..do continue pleasee!!

Author's Response: oh i will, don't worry. Thanks for reviewing!

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