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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by casa_bella Ruins

29th February 2008:
BAHAHAHAH!! this is so great! I love it! I loved how you put POTC lines in there, great job!
you're the best-kept-secret-writer I've come across while I've been on this site... YAY YOU!
I love your stories!
10/10
kisses!
Lisa

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Review #2, by hogwartsdearest Ruins

30th January 2008:
hahaha. i knew some of the lines sounded familiar and then i read the other reviews. i loveee pirates just a wee bit less than harry potter. its a really good story you should write a sequel

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Review #3, by ladylilly Ruins

30th January 2008:
Another fanfiction gone pirates! I love this site! Great job!

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Review #4, by weluvjamesandcharlie Ruins

29th January 2008:
very pirates of the caribbean. i do believe those are exact words from At Worlds End. Nice story though. good job.

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Review #5, by The_Real_Hermione Ruins

29th January 2008:
I love your stories. You wouldn't happen to be a Pirates of the Caribbean fan would you?

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Review #6, by ShadowZora Ruins

29th January 2008:
seems familiar.
get the idea from Pirates of the Carribean?

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Review #7, by shrimp Ruins

29th January 2008:
a tad on the pirates fo the caribbean side?
"do you fear death?"
"advise your fighters: you can fight and all of you will die"
"I propose an exchange. Ron leaves with us and you can have Fred and George," Hermione announced.
"Done!" Ron replied, quickly.
"Not done!" the twins objected.
"Done," agreed Malfoy.


awseome but

love pirates fo the carabbean :)

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Review #8, by Tara Ruins

29th January 2008:
Wow! I'm looking forward to reading your book cuz that was just surprising.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm new so I need advice and reviews from other authors too!!!

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