4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by fuzzylogic Dirt

29th December 2010:
I really like this! It's nice and refreshing and original after so many cliche plots. I would LOVE if you kept writing this. Anyway, all the best and 10/10!

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Review #2, by harrypotterfan8187 Dirt

28th January 2008:
I like this so far. Hope to see some updates!

Author's Response: Already wrote a second chapter...but it seems to be totally off from my first! This story's plot isn't set in stone yet and I keep flipflopping!!! Thank you!

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Review #3, by Cethlenn Dirt

25th January 2008:
love the title- is this about neville's mother? good start!

Author's Response: Yeah, it is that Alice! I like the title too; I hope the story can live up to it! Thank you!

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Review #4, by Luv_Ginny Dirt

25th January 2008:
Good! Very cute, maybe if u added a little spice, maybe more main characters (Lily, James, Sirius?)10/10
~Ana

Author's Response: Yay; its cute :) I actually have to rewrite the second chapter: I sorta wrote it before the first and it's waaaay off.

I don't really like the main characters w/ Frank and Alice. I always imagained Frank and Alice a good few years older, more experienced then the Marauders :/ Thanks for the review!


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