too many big words !! XD lol love it :D Report Review
this is pretty good - the story's okay, but the writing needs some work.Author's Response: Yeah I'm on the verge of deleting this story. I'm not sure if I want to contine it or not. Thanks for your help. Report Review
Interesting.? It got kind of confusing when you got into the conversation. I liked it overall...would of explained more about how Sirius, James, Lupin, and Peter made the map. And a little about thier nicknames. Overall...excellentAuthor's Response: Sorry about the confusion, I'll try to work on it. Sometimes when I write dialouge I just go on a roll and don't stop to explain it. Bad habit, I know, but thaks for the review (= Report Review
Great chapter! Please update soon!10/10Author's Response: I'm waiting for validation so you'll see the next chapter in a couple days! Report Review
interesting story please continue it Report Review
Great chapter! Please update soon!10/10 Report Review
This is pretty cool. Report Review
Write the next chapter! This is really good! Report Review
ooo! i like this. update soon, i want to know how the map got created!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the encouragement. I really like this story a lot. Report Review
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