Def needs to be longer. AMAZING story idea, though. I haven't read one even similar to it. Great job, there. I'm quite impressed so far... totally didn't know you had it in you. Very superb.. I give you a 9/10. ^___^ (you need to tweak up your grammar/coherense a bit). Anywho. Nice job, overall. Very interesting.and difficult. Good luck* Report Review
Wow, this story is amazing, I didn't expect someone to get a story from new everything and make it into some. Alleged, this story is great keep it up! Report Review
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