He's so cute. So much like his father, and so unlike him at the same time. Great job. Your writing is getting better and better. Update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah, Albus has been made so he was like his father. But I think there are a lot of elements to him that are almost representative of Ron. Which is weird, I know. Thanks for reviewing!
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Wow. you finally wrote this. Good beginning. I like the new characters, and how you linked the prequel to this one.

Author's Response: Yeah, I finally did. I'm glad you liked the new characters. Thanks for reviewing!
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I think it's an interesting idea of having an OC with the new next-gen kids. I like it that it's from Damien's point of view in this chapter. I think if you are going to change some of the ideas from your previous story, you might as well go full-out canon. That's just me because I'm a freak about that. anyway, I'm interested to see what houses they'll be sorted into and such.

Author's Response: I think it just makes sense. As close as the cousins seem, it seems likely that they would make friends that aren't part of the family. I would love to make this story completely Canon, but I feel like I'm letting down a few people who really enjoyed the prequel to this, and I believe I've made it Canon enough that those who prefer it over AU can enjoy this story as well. Thanks for reviewing!
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I like Damien! He seems to be a strong character who fits in well with Albus and Rose. I cant wait for the sorting to see what house Damien goes into. HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER I CANT WAIT lol. :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you do. I tried to make him a character who was indivual from the others but is compatiable with Albus and Rose. I'll try and get the next chapter up as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing!
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