I really liked it! Ginny's poems were very good. I also liked how Professor Binns gave Ginny ten points to Gryffindor.Author's Response: Thanks massie! Report Review
Nice one! I really like the poems actually, especially the second one about the roller coaster. :) I've always loved Ginny's character, and I haven't read many fics about her sixth year without the trio. I find it interesting that she doesn't seem to have made many friends in her own year. JKR never mentions Ginny's friends either, actually, so maybe Ginny's stint in first year messed up her social life? Great job! This is really well written and you've got me thinking of Ginny now... :D 10/10
AetherAuthor's Response: Thanks! Ginny's character has always been fascinating to me. The way she builds a relationship with Ron's friends, but doesn't really seem to have any her own age (Luna might be the exception). While JKR mentioned Neville and his role in the battle of Hogwarts, little mention was made regarding Ginny and her skills.
Thanks so much for your review, I'm really glad you liked it! Report Review
That was really cute =]Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
A little short, but not many spelling or grammar mistakes. Thumbs up!Author's Response: Thanks!!! Report Review
Wow, those were amazing poems. I can't believe that you wrote them. The part where Professor Binns complimented/gave her points for 'taking notes' was really funny. Her avoiding Neville made me kind of sad, but her reasons were good. I never thought of the seventh book from Ginny's point of view, Neville maybe, but not Ginny. I congratulate you on a wonderful idea. :) I just wanted to say again that the poems are really good and they fit the story perfectly. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you soooo much!!! I really LOVE your positive feedback!!!!!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it!!!
Thanks again =>
~Crazy Report Review
Sorry for taking so long with the review. Got a tad bit grounded. ;)
-On the Positive Side-
I love the poems! They're gorgeous and you could definetly have a career as a poet. ;) I thought the way Ginny acted was way realistic. Subconsiously (sp?) writing her feelings, I do that .> um sometimes. ;)
-On the Negative Side-
This story didn't really seem to have a direction. It seemed like you wrote the poems and then tried to write a story around it. It probably would've been better if you had made it longer, expanding on her feelings. Expanding, possibly, on Neville's feelings. It was cute but kinda pointless.
A cute pointless. ;)
~PrincessAuthor's Response: hey!!
Thanks so much for the feedback, i'll keep it in mind when i write.
Thanks for the review =)
~Crazy Report Review
I don't know how to explain it, but this really isn't how things work. Well, they could, I guess, but you don't manage to convince me of it. Her pain isn't particulary tangible, and it doesn't feel real to me.
She was kind of excited because she knew she wasn’t going to be writing any love poems. She had spent a good portion of the weekend telling herself that she didn’t like Harry any more.
Like this sentence. I'm not sure what strikes me about it, but it's not very plausible.
Thank being said, you have a very good way with words. I especially liked the last poem, and overall the flow of words in your story. You write well.Author's Response: hey!! thanks so much for reviewing.
I'm glad you appreciated the poems.
I'll work harder on making things plausible, thanks =)
~CrazyForYou Report Review
Very sweet, but I think you should have put a little more plot into the story. I still enjoyed it very much. Good job :>Author's Response: hey!! thanks so much for reviewing!! ya, it was kinda a quick thing, so i didnt put that much time into it... glad you enjoyed it =) Report Review
Cute...a bit short...but cuteAuthor's Response: yay!! my first review for this story!! glad you liked it =) Report Review
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