Really well written, and I love the arguments!
Please continue! Report Review
that was brilliant :] Report Review
update soon please?.i really liked the banner 2 Report Review
Hey, I just wanted to tell you that is think your story has some real potential here. I read your summary and it immediately got me hooked. The fact that she is determined to make her like him no matter what he does really appeales to me, and from what I've seen this chapter she has a cheerful and bubbly personality, wich I like also. So as for your question wether or not to continue this story, please do, because I really like it. 10/10 for the potential and because I liked this chapter. Report Review
I love Vesper, she's so wacky and zany, and I love how she drives Snape crazy. Sometimes though, it can be confusing. It would be helpfull to put a little more descriptions in with the detail. I love you're diologe though. I love it, keep it up Report Review
you write well, but it was bit confusing since not much background info was given. to be honest, you were just missing some filler stuff that would have made the story better.
I might have some time to beta for you, so get back to me about that. Report Review
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