This is really sad. The last paragraph, and last sentance altogether is particularly haunting.
Hate to sound really stupid but I don't understand the sentance:
“I thought you were never supposed to trust a Weasley twin, what about you Fred?”
Keep writing! xAuthor's Response: haha, you don't sound stupid at all! I have really been meaning to fix this chapter. I wrote it when I was fifteen so it needs some work. I HATE that sentence. :) Thanks for the compliment though! Report Review
Good start! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Update soon! :) Report Review
A good start, a little confusing to follow but am interested to see what happens next. Report Review
So pretty much you're awesome Angelina Ze Insightful and I'm not just basing this off the fact you're my bamfwabff cant wait for the next chapter! Hurry up with it all ready! jk. :) By the way loved how you couldn't tell who it was about till the end. Very creative! And yes I actually am writing a review on one of your works. Because I'm awesome of course. Duh! Keep it up though I really want to know what happens next!Author's Response: thanks bamfwabff! Report Review
great job! really really descriptive. my only complaint is that it was kind of confusing, is she dead or not? then all of a sudden shes at hogwarts..it's a bit hard to follow. but if you choose to update i'll probably find out :) good story i enjoyed reading it :D Report Review
Interesting beginning.I'd like to see how the rest of the story continues. Report Review
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