Oh wow! I read this in like 15 mins! Lol thats a new record for me.hehehehheheh anyways...I love this story! *aida smiles* Oh you might want to space between when people are talking...i think it will be easier for people to read it! Just a suggestion but its yr story!

Rating: Two thumbs away away away up!

~Aida~

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. You see it did have spaces on my computer and when I put it on here they seemed to disappeared. Because I noticed this and I was like Opps. Haha. Thanks for pointing it out. :D

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good story It kinda made me want to laugh out loud but Iheld it in considering my insane famiy.

Author's Response: Lol oh well Im insane and I have laughed out loud at a story and my family just loked at me and thought oh well its Emma being Emma lol
Thanks so much for the review
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awww!!! that was sooo cuh-yoot!!! im soo jealous, iv never bin any good @ next generation stories... but anyway im reviewin cuz u so kindly were the very 1st (not 2 mention only) 2 review my story 'Dee's Happy Beginning' so i decided that i should return the favor!!! thx soo much 4 the cuteness!!! 10/10!!! xP

Author's Response: Aww thanks that was such I sweet review and your story rocked it so deserved a review and how else can you inprove if people dont review
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Well, firstly there are no gaps in between people saying things like there are supposed to be, and I'm not sure how you got that validated like that! But the content is good, although (and this is my second point) the grammar could do with some work. For instance,
"...across from her doing his potions homework. He noticed that there was something bugging her.
“Rose?” he said, concerned.
“Uh!” Rose jumped.
“You have only put your name on your Defence Against the Dark Arts homework. Usually you would be annoying me by now.”
Yeah, like that. But otherwise quite a good story and I might return for more chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks

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You do lovely work for a fourteen year old. And you say this came to you in the middle of school assembly? NICE JOB!!!

Author's Response: Thanks a lot and yeah weirdly it did and guess what I dont have a cue what the assembly was about all i remeber was my best guy friend dressed up as a girl Lmao But who would forget that?
Thanks for the review it was really sweet Hugsxx

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helllooo
i was indeed loved up enough to write a review for you
it might have been my computer or...a special effect but the story was on there twice.
anyway. i really enjoyed it and i was trying to restrain myself from tears (not really...but mentally). great effort and please write more or else i will hunt you down. yes missy i will hunt you down. please please look at my stuff. or again i will hunt you down...(you are officially being stalked)
love lucaay

Author's Response: Oh suddenly I'm really scared lol
So to stop myslef being scared I will tell you I ave posted another story and I will read yours Thanks for the amusing review
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im a loser :( so so so so so such such a loser wah

Author's Response: Okay how?? Lmao
Hugs thanks for reviewing

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That was a really sweet chapter .Excellent job. Hope you write other types. I would love it, if you could review my story. I would love the feedback. Great job once again :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing glad, you like it. I am writing another James (II)/OC so that should be up soon.
I will have a look and review yours
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Thanks again for reviewing it means a lot

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Good story, very sweet!! Thanks for reviewing mine.
Lily M.E Potter

P.S Did you know your story is up there twice as if it had copied or something?

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing and your welcome.
I know it is up twice it won't let me delete the second one but thanks fr telling me!!
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Very nice! I really liked it! Great job! The story is posted twice in the same chapter, just so you're aware.

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hey- cute but i think it was more a james/oc than a rose/scorpius. it was good though, did you notice you had done the same chapter twice? just to let you know :)

Author's Response: Lol it did kind of start off all Rose/Scorpius but I loved the James/OC cuteness lol and i got a bit carried away lol

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omg omg u have this posted twice but it is still very cute

Author's Response: Thanks I loved writing it
It was really cool to do when your internet is bust so i entertain me and once i started i couldn't stop Lol
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