Reading Reviews for The Allure of Escape
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Review #1, by sunshinedreamr The Allure of Escape

26th January 2008:
Hi there. :] You reviewed my story The M Word so I thought I would come read one of yours.

I really love stories that are kind of like the missing peices to the books and fill in the gaps. And to think to do it with this particular scene is a very interesting concept. It was nice to read a story about someone who wasn't really a main character, seeing that's what most of the stories on this site are. So I applaud you for writing such an interesting and creative story about the woman we all love to hate. lol. You did an excellent job with this. :]

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Review #2, by Scott The Allure of Escape

23rd January 2008:
Someone needs to get Ciara a Valium.

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Review #3, by Miles The Allure of Escape

22nd January 2008:
Good job Kyle. Very well written, and exciting!

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Review #4, by a_broken_smile The Allure of Escape

22nd January 2008:
Kyle! My bestest, bestest friend who can't stand me right now, or so he says!

I'm sitting next to you right now in keyboarding. Hi! (btw, stein really, really hates me; she's probably glaring at me from behind her computer screen. another btw, YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO AGREE WITH ME!)

Your story, in short, sux. Sux meaning, absoulutely fantasmical! I think you need a banner and a beta reader though. (*coughcoughmecoughcough*) Your story is actually funny, which surprised me. I always thought you were a no-nonsense ROTC jarhead.

Anyway, watch overuse of words, try more adjectives and descriptions, and all in all, THINK IT THROUGH! You're a silly biatch, don't be afraid to show it.

To get ahead in life, you have to be obnoxious and loud, like me! Try it some time; it really works.

Till midterms are over, bye.


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