Creative concept! You also did a nice job describing their reactions and feelings. Report Review
I wonder why Mrs. Brooke husband abounded her/Author's Response:
That's up to you to decide. (: Report Review
That was so... ugh, there isn't a word.
I love this. It's written quite plainly, with no tediously desriptions, but just enough to keep me wanting more. Surprise ending was great. I should really write one of those... :P
Fabulous, m'dear. Keep writing, and keep on reading. ::))Author's Response:
Thank you. :) Report Review
Wait...I don't mean to sound stupid but I don't get it? Why would he lie...HELP!
Very well written, I just must not be preceptive today.Author's Response:
That's pretty much up to you. In my mind it was because he thought he was protecting his wife. Report Review
what the crap?
why would he do that!
this can't be the end of this story.
update soon!Author's Response:
It is the end! It was only a one-shot. (: Report Review
that was wonderful. it was short, but great. i love that song, as well. (: another fantastic story from you! 10/10.Author's Response: Aww, thanks. (: Report Review
That was brilliant. When I hadn't yet reached the end I was really confused about why you'd be writing about something so plain--not that there's anything wrong with that--but it could have been a normal fiction without the "fan" part had it not been for that fantastic surprise ending.
I'm sort of new to today's internet (this is my first signed review), but I used to be into fanfiction when I was younger. I'm glad I chose to read your fic first, and I can only hope that the future ones live up to yours.
:), DharAuthor's Response:
It was supposed to take place after the Final Battle. (: That's why I didn't submit it to my FC account. I'm glad you liked it though! Report Review
Wow. It felt like I had to hold my breath the entire time I was reading this. I actually had to read the ending twice, just to make sure that I hadn't gone mad. A beautiful, yet sad, one-shot, about a husband's love for his wife to have to lie about his death, absolutely amazing.Author's Response:
Thank you. (: Report Review
Oh, that was lovely! The twist at the end was completely unexpected, and your finishing sentence was perfect. All in all, great job =]
Love xX mOoNdAnCe XxAuthor's Response:
Thank you! This was my first shot at an unexpected ending so I'm glad I did it well. (: Report Review
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