{reviewid: 2287014, reviewer: 'chapstick'}
19th January 2010:
:P no sweet mid-dance floor kiss. Disappointed.
Nice story though... maybe another chapter is necessary to wrap things up? I think Sirius should do something dopey like dance with McGonagall :D
-Chanelle
Author's Response: lol haha ... i might just do that... haha thanks!
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{reviewid: 2275661, reviewer: 'kassandra466'}
29th December 2009:
awee!! that was so cute!! i LOVED it!! it was AMAZING!! : D
Author's Response: thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2241921, reviewer: 'Happy%20Lily%20Potter'}
22nd October 2009:
I liked it. It was kinda sweet. Good job.
Author's Response: thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2238765, reviewer: 'nina'}
17th October 2009:
more! does lily and james get together?
what happens?
i love it!
Author's Response: more? lol it was just a one-shot .. maybe i'll do more when i finish my other to fics :) thanks for the review :)
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{reviewid: 2238190, reviewer: 'lilywithnojames'}
16th October 2009:
Aww, this is the first story that I actually wanted to read on this site for quite some time!
Yay for bringing the standard back up, keep writing!
Author's Response: lol thanks :)
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{reviewid: 2238160, reviewer: 'Harry%20and%20Ginny'}
16th October 2009:
cute fic u have here. great work with it.^_^
10/10
Harry and Ginny
Author's Response: thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2238072, reviewer: 'Paloma%20Patil'}
16th October 2009:
Very cute. Great use of a great song.
I can't figure out what this sentence means: “Can we leave I so tried?” I think I may have missed something.
Other than that, it's quite well done.
Paloma
Author's Response: :) thanks for picking that up.. i'll fix it up asap :) thank you :)
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{reviewid: 2179947, reviewer: 'sreduaram'}
1st August 2009:
awww. its really cute :) and James got his dance!
Author's Response: thanks for the review :)
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{reviewid: 2113966, reviewer: 'lilyandjamespotter'}
9th May 2009:
poor james :( atleast he got a dance
Author's Response: thanks for the review :)
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{reviewid: 2113965, reviewer: 'stacyblack'}
9th May 2009:
aw... too short!!! maybe a bit more fluff?
Author's Response: yeah i know... but i'm not so good with the fluff
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{reviewid: 2050645, reviewer: 'happy_person'}
7th February 2009:
thats it? thats really, really it?? what about the romantic dance, the confession of lily's love to james and the kiss that seals their fate? it seems incomplete without the whole thing, i think anyway... it started out well but then it just..well ended like that *snaps fingers* i think it would have been more "full" if u added the fluffiness of their first real kiss.
Author's Response: lol... i thought about adding fluffiness.. but truth be told i'm not that good at it..
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{reviewid: 1928122, reviewer: 'Elizabeth'}
20th May 2008:
Aww that's cute...pretty realistic too!
Author's Response: thanks. =)
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{reviewid: 1871443, reviewer: 'utterly%20confused'}
21st March 2008:
how sweet :] i like it
Author's Response: thanks
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{reviewid: 1867738, reviewer: 'wanna%20be%20witch'}
18th March 2008:
That was cool. I love the banner by the way.
Author's Response: thanks. took me ages to find the right picture.
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{reviewid: 1818661, reviewer: 'EvansPotter'}
4th February 2008:
just lovely. i loved it. 10/10.
Author's Response: thanks. =].
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{reviewid: 1815131, reviewer: 'Ryans%20Charming%20Girl'}
1st February 2008:
*Says in a sing-song voice* To Short! To Short! To Short!
10/10!
Author's Response: i know, i know, but that's how long the song was. thanks for the review. =]
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{reviewid: 1812473, reviewer: 'JamesBlackPower'}
30th January 2008:
that was romantic it was a very good story
Author's Response: thanks. =]
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{reviewid: 1808620, reviewer: 'Smith_Babe_1'}
27th January 2008:
Awww bless them
Brill story
Author's Response: thank you muchly. =].
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{reviewid: 1808417, reviewer: 'TopazEyez'}
27th January 2008:
Aw. Short and cute. Good job. First fanfic?
Author's Response: yeah my first songfic, thanks for reviewing.
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