that was a nice story.very sweet

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So sweet! Harry and Hermione are so cute together.

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Love It! Most defiantly. That was a great job for a first shot at a Harmony story. You did great Emma. :D

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That was really cute! i luved it!

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great!
keep writing i love all your stories
Bamber
xx

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love it so much.it is the sweatest story ever.

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Well again I'm not really a fan of Harry/Hermione. (It never made sence to me because she's ment to be with DRACO! haha) But for your first try I think it was pretty good! I always liked the mirror so I liked that it was about that. lol.

Oh, this has nothing to do with this story but I've come up with a new charater in my book The Tale of Tails (It's a slash for Remus/Sirius) his name is Johnny Moretti. I love him. haha. He comes into it in the third chapter which I just finished last night. :DD. Well anyways he's like my Flick! :DD. Yayy. I wouldn't be surprised if I ended up having him in more stories. :PP.

Omg yesterday I went over to my friend's house and walked around with her but I had taken some of my meds for my tummy and so I was high haha. I found a magical circle-ly whole in her car. (The place you put gas in) And I beleived that it would take to another world, you know like Narnia or something. haha. And then we went on the swings and I became a hornless unicorn and I didn't want to go back to uni-world because all the other unicorns would kill me because I was a trator for lossing my horn. DD: sad I know. Yeah like I said I was a bit high off my meds haha.

Well anyways you did a great job here...like always x9. So I give you a very pretty-ful TENN!!! Yayy. *claps and dances around room.
--Lilly^^

P.S. Did I make this review long enough? haha. :PPP

Author's Response: The pairing used to make sense to me about six years ago after reading “Goblet of Fire” and “Order of the Phonenix”. I was cranky Harry liked Cho and I was like, “Why not Hermione? she’s so much better than her!” You’ll be amazed at how much I used to like that pairing…but then I read this story that was, let’s just say, too graphic for my liking. Since then, I haven’t been as fond of the pairing. And also because I liked Harry with Ginny and Hermione with Draco. I read heaps more stories about Dramione now.

But this one-shot came into my head after I saw a picture of the two of them (from first year and second year) on the internet while doing a random Google search and I simply couldn’t refuse to write it! It had a longer beginning, but then I decided to cut it out since it didn’t really make sense. So, here’s my first try!

Moretti, that sounds Italian. Is he Italian? I was going to learn Italian for my HSC, but then I dropped it because I hated the teacher lol. I picked up Geography instead. He’s like Flick? They should get together. Felicity may pop up in other stories other than FL and MH…I’ll have to wait and see what my muse thinks. Yes, I have a muse. She’s a fairy and she’s very bossy and loud and obsessed with Draco. Don’t ask me what her name is though.

Aren’t you always high? Lol, you sound high in your reviews. Lol, a circle that will take you to Narina? First it was a wardrobe, now a gas hole? I must find that on the Holden Commodore we own. Ha, I wish I was there seeing you become a hornless unicorn, that would have been fun! Was Ron one? Lol. Except that you have no horn and the unicorns think you are a traitor. That would not be fun.

Thanks for the review! I’m glad you liked the one-shot. Thanks for the rating too! *dances for joy*

Emma :D

p.s. yes, you did make the review long enough. Was my response longer though?

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I like it! :)
Although, being as it was a one shot and all, I just felt that how they got together could have been touched on a bit more. But other than that, great story! I don't usually like H/Hr but this was good :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I probably should have mentioned how they got together, but then it would have gotten way longer and I didn't want to do that! I'm glad you liked it anyway, even though it was Harry/Hermione...most people who reviewed don't like the pairing, but that's okay! This is the first time I've written that pairing...thanks for the review!

Emma :D

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Awww that was so cute I love it. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Emma :D

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it's really good!! should be a longer story.

Author's Response: Thanks! It was originally slightly longer at the beginning, but I decided it wasn't needed and cut it out. Thanks for the review! Emma :D

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This is so sweet, I don't usually like Harry/Hermione pairings but I genuinely loved this.

Author's Response: Thanks! I don't normally write Harry/Hermione, but this came to mind and I couldn't refuse. Thanks for the review! Emma :D

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wow, this is so great! I love it! great job,
going to check out your other stories some time, sorry but I cant now,
10/10
kisses!
Lisa

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! That's okay if you have time to read my other stories...i understand how busy life can become! lol, doing the last year of school ain't easy. thanks for the review! emma :D

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Aww, this is adorable! You should write a sequel! R and r my fic plz.

Author's Response: I don't know whether I'll write a sequel to this...I'll have a think about it...I haven't read ur story in awhile and I'm really sorry. I've been very busy with school and all. I'll read it sometime. thanks for the review!

Emma :D

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awwwhsters !
that was really cute.

Author's Response: thanks! emma :)

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ugh. if i add to favorites before i submit review, i lose what i wrote. anyways cute!!! i thought it was really cute. i'm not usually a fan of one-shots either. it was a nice full circle, and the sections fit together nicely. 'good job'

Author's Response: i like one-shots especially short ones but there's some i don't like. thank you for your review, i'm glad you liked it! emma :)

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Super story Emma! Really sweet and cute and very original! Haven't read any of this type ever! :) 10/10

Author's Response: thank you! i thought people had done this oen before but i guess they haven't! ha, i'm the first! thanks for reading! emma :)

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That was cute! 10/10

Author's Response: thank you! emma :)

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Awww!!! That was so cute! I'm a total Harmony fan, and i give this story a 10 out of 10! Such a cute one shot!
-Tish

Author's Response: yay a 10/10 rating! thank you for reading this story! emma :)

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Awww now that was very sweet. Just the right amount of 'fluff'. Thanks for posting this.

Author's Response: you're welcome. thanks for the review! emma :)

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it's so cute!! :) I like the idea of the mirror as well :) good work!

Author's Response: thanks! :)

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Aww that was cute. ^^ I like that one. :)

Author's Response: thanks! :)

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I love it, to me it was a great first attempt. not sure if i spelled that right

Author's Response: thank you, i'm glad u liked it! emma :)

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I really love this. I love when Harry and Hermione go back to the mirror six years later. So romantic!

Author's Response: thank you! i'm glad you enjoyed it! emma :)

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that was an excellent fist story, it was so kute and romantic and i was surprised i liked it, cuz i normally don't like harry/hermione fics, but this one was great. excellent job.
10/10

Author's Response: thanks! most of the reviews i've had so far aren't fond of the harry/hermione pairing and i guess why people like it is because it's cute but doesn't really go into the romantic side as much (even though it is romantic in the end). i'm glad u enjoyed it! thanks for the review! emma :)

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I think it was a very sweet story thank you for sharing it :)

Author's Response: and thank you for reading and reviewing the story! i'm glad u liked it! emma :)

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