you have the best disclaimers! Haha and stories of course :) poor remus, having to witness all that. Loved it!

Author's Response: Haha thanks, I am glad you like my disclaimers. And stories, of course :D Yeah I'll admit, I felt bad for Remus in this story, the things we do for our friends :P Thanks again!

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Super cuteee, I loved it, it was a fun read

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Wow, I read it and favorited it, but I didn't review? I'm officially ashamed of myself--I've made it a point to review everything I read.

Personally, to me, it seems unlikely that Lily wouldn't have figured out about Remus because she was, you know, sort of friends with him. But, I liked how you made it so she was irrationally thinking about saving James, not just curious about what was out there. Because I hate when that happens.

I also enjoyed how it wasn't like she had this sudden revelation and then tried to save James; it was more like she was finally coming to terms with her feelings and desperately needed the opportunity to tell him and couldn't bear to let him get hurt.

Bravo to you.

Author's Response: Thank You I am so glad you liked it! I hate the whole Lily suddenly being in love thing too so I was trying to make sure I avoided that. Thanks again for the review!!!

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Omg it is so good! I think you did a very good job and i loved it! Keep them coming! It's weird I don't review very often so obviously yours must be pretty good for me to review

Author's Response: Thank You so much! I am so glad you liked it. Hopefully I will be able to start writing again soon. Thanks again!

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$@*&$%#! Wow! :D Definitely love this story! I was laughing so hard at the bit where Remus was awake and saw everything haha

Great job!

Also i'm excited about the sequel! Can't wait :)

Author's Response: Haha thank you! I think that is everyone's favorite part! Glad you liked it, and thanks for the review!!!

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yay
a sequel
I absolutely loved this one
Am going now to check the other

Author's Response: Thank You so much! I am glad you liked it. And thanks for checking out the sequel too!

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This was lovely! Just the right amount of fluff and I liked how Severus had a small role.

Author's Response: Thank You! I am so glad you liked it. I wrote the first few chapters of a sequel so feel free to check it out. Thanks again!

~Leo

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i loved it.
keep righting
xxx

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argh, this is like, amazing :D
i really love it,
i'd love it even more if you made it a short story :D
xo

Author's Response: So glad you liked it. Thank You so much for the review and I did write a sequel called Close to Heaven, feel free to check it out! Thanks again for the review!

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i think a spin off of this would be really good. a kind of what happened next thing

Author's Response: I did a spin off. Take a look at close to heaven. Thanks for the review!

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saying i loved it would be such an understatement but I'm going to say it anyway. I LOVED IT!!!

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LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! Pure brilliance. It was cute and funny and you kept truth to all the characters. I didn't find it long-winded and boring and repetitive like some Lily and James stories are. But you definitely left me wanting more. I love your writing style and can't wait to read more from you. Thanks for the great read :)

100/100

Author's Response: Thank You so much! I am a total characterization Nazi so I had to make sure that the characters were JUST right :P. This one shot has been pretty popular and I am so glad you and everyone else love it so much :). Thank You again so much for the amazing review!!! :)

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Omg that was ADORABLE and actually quite intense *checks pulse* Also, the whole Sirius walking in on James and Lily is kinda a cliche, but it is my absolute FAVORITE cliche EVER!!
*Sigh* I love me some Potter

Author's Response: Thank you so much :P Glad you liked the little heated moment at the end :). I know its cliche but to be honest it was the only way I could get them to stop :P I'm so glad you liked it though and thank you for the review!!!

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Awww! That was so cute!

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Awww... that was a really cute way of getting them together! I really like it! Oooh... a sequel sounds great!

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it :) The beginning of the sequel is already up so feel free to check it out :) Thanks for the review!

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OMG!! I LOVED IT!!! havent read this story in a while!! picked it up and rememberd how much i loved it!! Amazing job!!!

Author's Response: Thank You so much! I am so glad you loved it enough to re read it :) Thanks again for the review!!! :)

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OMW that was so so so AWESOME, you are such a good writer!

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I really liked it, good luck with the sequal!

Author's Response: Thank You so much for reviewing. I am working on it now :)

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This is so adorable. I absolutely love it. I saw no spelling/grammar mistakes and you portrayed their feelings perfectly. I do think you could have tried to add some more detail in Sirius and Remus reaction though. Over all it was magnificent. Good plot, great seperation of the scenes and no OOC characters.

Author's Response: I am so glad to hear you like it! There is more Remus and Sirius in the continuation to this story, Close to Heaven. Just to let you know, if you check it out feel free to review! :) Thanks again!

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wow! this was a really good james/lily one-shot!!

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OH MY GOD! I so adore this story! I've read it like three times now! I Have no FRIKING idea why I didn't put this on my favorite yet but I'm doing it NOW! Congrats! and PLEASE! I beg you! Write more Lily and James stories! PLEASE! *Claps and a cookies*- Charly

Author's Response: Thank You so much! I can't believe you read it so much! I a glad you like it so much, and that you favorited it :D I am writing more, don't worry!

Thanks for the review!!! and the cookie :D

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That was awesome :P
loved it

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A sequel!!! YAY! I am so happy. The ending was hilarious. I like how she found out about everything at once. The animagus and werewolf, that she loved him everything.
Keep writing, I hope to see that sequel soon!
Hugs
HPB

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the review :D I guess this was just a bit of the sweetness in me. The sequel is already up, its called Close to Heaven :) Hope you like it, feel free to check it out! Thanks again!

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YAY I will definatly read your sequel...this was really good and very emotional! absolutely loved it!

Author's Response: Haha thanks! I am glad you liked it and thanks for the review! Feel free to leave one on the sequel too! I am glad you liked the emotion, I was worried about it.

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Great one shot. Perfect

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