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Review #1, by Katana His Most Faithful Servant

18th January 2008:
That was really intense. Excellent job in describing Bellatrix' emotions. It's interesting that you chose to use first person here, and there were times when it was very well executed. I think you took a big risk there. I especially liked the part where she felt that overwhelming hatred towards her husband. Nice one-shot. --Dhar

Author's Response: I usually use first person, because I like to get into the character's head — even if the character is as creepy as Bella. Thanks so much for the review!

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