How very talented you are. This story is simply beautiful. Wonderfully tragic. Well done. Report Review
Wow, this is some powerful writing. I'm speechless. Report Review
That was entirely lovely! :D I love how you switched from past to present - it was ahmazingg. You're a brilliant writer; and I loved this take on how she died. It was brilliant. :) good job! Report Review
It's beautifull, such a wonderfull story. This is why I read fanfiction. :) Report Review
Awe! I almost cried! That was really good. Report Review
This is lovely and very well written: the closing paragraph ends the story wonderfully.
I have a fondness for minor characters -- they come with a bit more freedom, but I think it takes a good amount of creativity to explore their thoughts and their world. This story definitely does not disappoint in the creativity and originality aspect.
I enjoy reading your work immensely!Author's Response: I love minor characters too! (Obviously). They're just so fun to work with.
I'm really glad you liked this. Thank you! Report Review
This is really, really, really good! It's so well done and so sad! I love it!Author's Response: Thanks! yeah, sorry it's a bit of a downer. :) Report Review
I never got a chance to read it until now. It was beautiful! At the end it was mad confusing, but I got it. The ending was mad sappy, son.Author's Response: Thanks, daughter. Don't think I don't know who you are...and what exactly you burgle :P. Thanks for reviewing, though. You're my fave!
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mm that was beautiful. I think that some of the best fics I've read have stemmed from a small glance at a new character in the books. You made it work very well, the innocence inscription and her death in the book and her relationship with Snape.Author's Response: Yeah, I love minor character stories too. They leave so much room to move around in without going AU. I'm glad you liked this. Thank you! Report Review
You did a very great job by writing this story. I like that you described three times and managed to intertwine them quite professionaly. I think you depicted their affection in a very real way - more emotion between them would be too much, but less wouldn't make any story.
10/10Author's Response: Aw, thank you SO MUCH! I was a bit worried about this story and its lack of, well...action, romance, etc. Affection is a good word for it, though, and a good choice on your part. :) It's great to hear that someone liked this. Thanks again! Report Review
that was really sad and lovely. well done!Author's Response: Well thank you very much! Report Review
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