Love you, Love your writing, and for fucks sake if the next thing you write is not as good as this then expect to be killed in your sleep! (JOKES) lol. xo heidi xo Report Review
I like it it was deep and you kind of feel like you can understand her feelings and her struggles.I can honestly say i loved it for the feeling in it.Author's Response: Why thank you for the lovely review! I'm glad you liked it! It was a pleasure to write! Report Review
I loved it.It was awsome! B.D.AAuthor's Response: Thanks! Glad you thought it was awesome :D Ayana Black-Malfoy Report Review
Fantastic job yenna!Just purely brilliant. I am not a fan of Dramione's, but this one is very good. Great job!Author's Response: Hhaah yes i know your dislike of Dramoines. However, I'm glad you like it anyways :D Ayana Black-Malfoy Report Review
I actually really liked. It was good, it was different. It seems like it would be challenge though. Sometimes dialogue is what makes the story but again this was really good! Great writing! Hope to read more from you!Author's Response: Why thank you! *blushes* I'm not used to so much praised. Well, I do have a lot of other writing going on, so you can read that! :D Ayana Black-Malfoy PS: Thanks for the review! :D Report Review
I really liked this story. I loved that it had no dialogue. Most people put too much, myself being one of them. I tend to find myself going through conversations but forgetting to add in the details of expressions, gestures and feelings. I loved it!Author's Response: Why thank you! Ya I liked to do this, as it really opened up my perspective. But it was really hard!! I'm so glad you liked it! Ayana Black-Malfoy Report Review
OMW this is so good the emotions are portrayed really well and I think dialogue would actually ruin the flow of the story 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm happy that you think I did a good job with the emotions! Report Review
I liked it; it was different. The effect of no dialogue was really good. There weren't any interuptions to her thoughts; we get her whole point of view.Author's Response: Thanks! I definitely liked trying this, as it WAS so different! Ayana Black-Malfoy Report Review
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