ahaha! this is priceless..good job!! you really should be proud of yourself, it was a little rush but meh. im too picky. god job!!
8/10

~Annie

Author's Response: Thankyouu :D :D
btw, your penname cracked me up!

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Very Funny! and interesting to read!
I liked it a lot!!
poor Ronald!

Author's Response: yayyy! thank youuu!!! :D lol

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oh thats funny!
i thought they were going to force him to use the sticky solution on his date with Hermione!!!
but i liked this ending better

Author's Response: thank you! :D
haha, good thinking!
thanks for the review! :D

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Cute, a nice little story that made my day

Author's Response: thank you! :) your review made my day, too!

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AMAZING! The perqual (sp?) was amazing as well, but I'm putting all my comments in one review, I LOVED THEM BOTH!

Author's Response: thank you!! :D:D:D
i loved your review!!

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hey! there are no televisions in the wizarding world! and i didn't really like the ending. i mean you wrote it like it was a total shock, but i mean it's the twins!come on! like no offense or anything but i think that it would have been better if george was just like "to bad we already have all the ingredients we need, but we'll call you if we ever need more gnome saliava", or something like that. i see how you are trying to build up the tension to the climax and stuff, but one this isn't really the climax, and two i think all the extra dialogue makes it less funny. and come on, it fred and george, it has to be funny!

Author's Response: hey :) Mr. Weasley loved muggle objects right? and now that Hermione joined the family, she helped them get a television..
oh, thanks for the idea. i think i will work on the ending.. :)
thanks for your review!

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so why are fred and george like living at the burrow? i mean they have a flat above the shop, and like tons of money, don't they?

Author's Response: they were visiting the burrow, but maybe i'll change that..

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Oh, how cruel! Well, that's Gred and Forge for you. :)

Author's Response: yup, exactly!
thanks for your review! :)

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AHHAHAHAH that was so funny! amazing story! i liked it a lot! another sequel would be cool ;)
great job
10/10
~Michelle

Author's Response: :D thank you!! :D:D:D
another sequel? Hmm.. i don't think i have any ideas but will think about it :D
thank you once again!

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LOL, he had to do all of that, for nothing? Great ending!

Author's Response: hehe, thanks! i just love Fred and George!

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Yeah; poor, poor, Ron. I feel sorry for him... I hate spiders also!

Author's Response: lol.. yeah, so do i! spiders are... scary!
thanks for your review!

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