These are actually really cool. Can't wait to read the next one.Author's Response: You seem so surprised. I'm a little insulted. Lol. I'm just kidding.
It might take a while, I'm stuck. :[
Thanks for reviewing though! Report Review
Good. Strange, different and you're killing off some of my favorite characters. I love it!
I said before in the other review, you're work is refreshing and delightfully twisted. I think you rushed through the part where Draco flings himself into fire after the mirror and you sometimes use the wrong 'tense' with certain words, but nothing can distract from the wonderful oddity of this collection of chapters.
I really hope you write more, let me know if you do!Author's Response: Haha. Sorry about killing your favorites off. I love Draco too, but I couldn't help but kill him.
Yeah, I thought I rushed through that part. I'll have to edit that along with the 'tenses'.
I'm glad that it didn't distract from the story though.
I'll be sure to tell you if I write more.
Okay. Wow. This is excellent writing. I admit, I was totally surprised when Ron stabbed Harry, but it was perfect, that scene would have just kind of fizzled if you ended it any other way, but it didn't. You rocked it!
I don't usually read dark/horror stuff, but when I saw that bit in your siggy, I thought your writing sounded different and interesting. I'm glad I checked it out :)
One little tip: I would have kept the whole of the story in Ron's POV. We've read the books, we've seen the movies, we know how Harry feels. The reason this chapter is refreshing and different is because of the impact from Ron's emotions, the volitile force of what he feels. That impact get's cut when you switched into Harry's POV.
Either way though, damn good bit of writing, I really hope to see more from you!Author's Response: Lol. Wow. I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for the tip. I'll change it as soon as I can. Report Review
God, that was really twisted. In a good way, though. I'd like to see where this is going... Please update soon!Author's Response: Haha. I aim for twisted. :]
Glad you liked it. Report Review
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