Hi, this was a strange little story, but well written. The way you wrote it made me want to read to the end to find out who was in love with ron. I will definitely continue to read this story if you write more!

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No wonder you write Hermione and Ron so well. You've written so many stories about them its amazing! But theyre all brilliant and unique so thats great. You really displayed Hermiones emotions and feelings for Ron sooo well. Ive never read something so nicely detailed with a Ron/Hermione story. And its great to see your Hermione so normal, and really refreshing. I just loved that you wrote everything that Hermione liked about Ron. it was so sweet. And theyre getting married! But now Ive just realised that this isnt beingtold by Hermione? I wonder who it could be. Theyre married to George, so maybe its Luna? Well, whoever they are I felt so bad for them during the wedding scene... OH MY!Its Harry! I cant believe that! That was so shocking! But it was so brilliant. You really are clever! This was so clever!

Author's Response: HA! You thought it was Hermione! I'm surprised it tricked you, one of the warnings did say slash. Anyway, I'm so glad you thought it was clever! It's one of my favourite one-shots, and my first slash, so I'm quite proud of it! Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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Hello again!

I think Harry and George were adorable together, even if Harry didn't feel as strongly for George as George felt for him. The story seemed to go by very fast, and some of the lines seemed choppy. I actually happen to think Lavender and Krum would make a wonderful couple ;P Anyways, it was really bittersweet, and I felt Harry's pain. I have never been one for Harry and Ron together, in fact I think this may have been my first, but you may just have me hooked on it :P

-Caitlin

Author's Response: Awww, yay, I got you hooked on Harry/Ron! Anyway, so glad you could feel his pain, it means I must have done something right! Anyway, yeah, it's a bit choppy, and I think I may get a beta for it, but I'm not entirely sure. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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That was weird. He married George? i dont get it. It was well written it was just... different.

Author's Response: Yeah, it was...and yeah, he 'married' George...

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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didn't see that one coming.. =P

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox


~ginny_malfoy22

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Wowie

That was certainly different

Though I did pick it up quite early on, it was still quite interesting

Nicely written

Author's Response: Hehe, I thought people might, but oh well.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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I thought that was brilliant!

Just one thing: if I were you I would make the summary and the ending just a little more subtle. I guessed it would be Harry when I read the words in the summary "you won't know til the end". I guessed it would be him, because I assumed it would be someone I would never expect it to be...

Also the last two lines where you introduce the main character -if you do it a bit more indirectly, I think it would be more interesting.

This story really is very good, but I think you need to give your readers more credit. We do realise that we're not supposed to understand who's pov it is until the end when we start reading this, you don't need to say it explicitly.

I liked the mood you set in the story. There was a very good balance between Harry's thoughts and the dialogue. The first paragraph didn't always flow perfectly, but that's just nit picking on my part. All in all 8/10.

Thank you for an enjoyable read!

-atgowt

Author's Response: Thanks!

Yeah, I thought the actual story was a bit obvious, so yeah. I'll go change that.

I don't really know how I would...I'll try at some point.

Thanks, yeah I didn't really think any of it flowed, but yeah...thanks aboutt he good balance thing, some people thought I needed more description in the dialogue (not on here).

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxox

~ginny_malfoy22

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