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Review #1, by Emerald_Gryffindor Closest Encounters

15th February 2008:
I love this story keep the up the great job = ] well done

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Review #2, by pineapple Closest Encounters

15th February 2008:
yay you updated :]
great chapter
looking forward to the next :]

Author's Response: i'm glad you like it!! next update should be up soon, i'll probably put it up for validation sometime later today or tomorrow. in the meantime, a little bit of a teaser :P

"“ABBY!” Sirius called. James and Remus were right on his heels, but stood back as he reached her and pulled her into his arms. As he sat against the wall rocking and murmuring soft phrases to her, Abby collapsed into desperate sobs. Her tiny body wracked with each breath she took, and it was obvious she was in deep pain. “Abby, we need to-“

“NO!” she cried hoarsely, clinging to him. “Don’t leave me! Don’t leave me!” Her sobs worsened as she clawed at his back, clearly wanting to make sure he was really there and he was really who he claimed to be. Sirius winced but took her beating, not willing to hurt her to break away."


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Review #3, by pineapple Abby's Side

5th February 2008:
im suprised that this story hasnt had many reviews
because it is really good, i love the story line, how it is written and how you portray the characters. especially sirius, because he seems so genuine :)
i hope you update soon, because im looking forward to reading more

10/10

Author's Response: that is so funny, because i just got on with the intention of updating!! i hope you've got this one set to email when it updates; i've actually got 5 or 6 of the chapters typed and waiting!

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