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Review #1, by The Elite Diadem

7th March 2010:
You've definitely got the bare-bones down in this one-shot, and it could use some filling in. Hopefully, when your partner logs on and sees this, that author will have a bountiful amount of ideas to share and discuss with you. I like the way the story has turned out currently, but I am excited at its potential!

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