5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by hjplover Escape

18th January 2008:
this looks really good! it's fabulous writing! but it is sad, i can't wait till she gets to hogwarts!

Author's Response: Thanks! She finally goes to Hogwarts... in the third chapter probably... The next chapter is about Gopal (he he).

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Review #2, by xxmagnolia Escape

18th January 2008:
I love this story already, even though there's only one chapter. The emotion in it is great, I felt so sad for them. Your writing style is good too, your use of good grammer and spelling made my day. Can't wait for the next chapter =)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm working on the next one...

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Review #3, by Cressy Escape

18th January 2008:
This is a really good first chapter. One of the best written pieces I've read in a while. I look forward to reading more. Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Kisses for you!

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Review #4, by Black Mirror Escape

18th January 2008:
Good start. Sounds like something different and I think I will like Maeve with some Indian experience when she grows up.

Author's Response: Thanks... Hopefully it will get better. The first chapter is a little boring because it's mostly background...

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Review #5, by Madelyn Escape

18th January 2008:
really good story and i really like the title, update soon

Author's Response: I'll try...

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