{reviewid: 2496760, reviewer: 'Sara_Sj'}
21st March 2011:
:O
Oo Draco got CAUGHT. hahaha.
I liked it. Amazing. Brilliant. Wonderful.
His gaze snapped to hers, knowing she finally knew.
I can't imagine what he was feeling :P.
I wish you made it a bit longer. I like the ending and I'd like it to stay like that, I understand why you would cut it there. But couldn't you make the REST of the story a bit longer? Give it just a bit more depth?
Just an opinion.
Off to read the sequel !
Author's Response: thanks!! (: and yeah, the ending was a bit abrupt. i guess a couple years ago i liked ending this story there! haha...thanks again!! i definitely appreciate both of your reviews!
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{reviewid: 2363601, reviewer: 'Moments%20Reprieve'}
17th June 2010:
PRINCESS BRIDE REFFERANCE!
I'm sorry, but I love you for that :) It was an excellant story without that, though - really well written. Cheers!
Author's Response: thank you! this is my first work ever. i've improved so much since i wrote this but it's still very nice to know that it's still well-liked. thank you so much for your thoughts!!
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{reviewid: 2290059, reviewer: 'SuperDramioneFan2009'}
25th January 2010:
The plot is simly cunning
Author's Response: thank you very much. i am pleased to see that you like this story so much. have a beautiful day!
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{reviewid: 2286040, reviewer: 'rainbowsocks'}
18th January 2010:
that was absolutely adorable ♥
xoxo ~
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I have a sequel posted in case you are interested in checking that one out. Have a great day!
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{reviewid: 2274894, reviewer: 'katiefelton'}
28th December 2009:
I absolutely loved this! It is sooo cute:)
-katiefelton:)
Author's Response: thank you so much. i am glad to hear just that. Happy Holidays!! :)
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{reviewid: 2253285, reviewer: 'LilBoPeep'}
12th November 2009:
Oh my gosh, this was amazing. So much "intense-ness" in short little time. Wow, this is officially one of my favorite one-shots. :)
LilBoPeep
Author's Response: thank you so much!! it means the world to me knowing that this story was one that you loved this much! thanks a million.
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{reviewid: 2252069, reviewer: 'annella_grace'}
10th November 2009:
whats the sequel title?
Author's Response: The sequel is called, "I'll Continue Wishing." thanks so much for the review dear! :) it means the world to me.
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{reviewid: 2240612, reviewer: 'adluvshp'}
20th October 2009:
omg! OMG! this one's so short but so intense! so awesome! i love it. I am going on to the sequel now. u rock as a writer!
10/10
cheers!
AD
(I am ur fan now)
Author's Response: thank you so much for being such a true fan to my stories. i immensely appreciate it all.
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{reviewid: 2166946, reviewer: 'xxRedheadramioneloverxx'}
19th July 2009:
I only read this oneshot because its title was a line from the awesome movie "The Princess Bride." Everyone who reads this review, do yourself a favor and rent the movie on Netflix. Or look it up on Youtube, who knows, it mght be there. And for those who alrady know and love this movie, kudos to you!
Author's Response: i agree- it is a wonderful movie. thanks so much for the review.
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{reviewid: 2127314, reviewer: 'Mojopeplapu%20%28Jane%20Vallentino%29'}
27th May 2009:
can you please write this and make it longer? Thanks
Author's Response: i have a sequel posted if you are interested in checking that out. thanks so much for the lovely review!
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{reviewid: 2126908, reviewer: 'cazvalleygirl'}
27th May 2009:
This may have been short but as they say it's not always about quantity but about quality and this had bags of the stuff, well done 10/10 I'm off to read the sequel :D x
Author's Response: thanks for the lovely review. i am so glad to see that you are so interested in my work!
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{reviewid: 2100928, reviewer: 'Snagglepuss'}
19th April 2009:
Ah :D
this story is amazing
you should really continue this, i really like it!
It's a brilliant one shot but i think it would be good carried on aswell.
10/10
Author's Response: thank you for the lovely review. i am glad that this story pleased you in some means.
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{reviewid: 2096133, reviewer: 'iscreamdraco'}
13th April 2009:
omg..sigh..love it.sigh..sigh..
Author's Response: thank you so much for the lovely review.
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{reviewid: 2067744, reviewer: 'StepUpx_Gryffindor'}
3rd March 2009:
this should be a story! :D
it's very AU in a sense, but i love it. i'm grinning right now!
you stopped at the perfect time ;P
Author's Response: thank you so much. be sure to check out the sequel if you liked this one. thanks again.
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{reviewid: 2060923, reviewer: 'amy'}
22nd February 2009:
this is the BEST story on here. i LOVED it ! im wondering though, where's the sequel?
Author's Response: you can look on my author's page to find the sequel, but its title is 'I Will Continue Wishing.' i am glad that you liked this so much. the best story on here? well, i am not so sure about that, but thank you so much for thinking that way. i appreciate this wonderful and pleasant review of yours.
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{reviewid: 2060776, reviewer: 'cedric_diggorys_girl'}
22nd February 2009:
wow, an inspired story, i love it and i am going to read the sequel now!!
Author's Response: thank you so much for this wonderful review.
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{reviewid: 2054680, reviewer: 'Timechild'}
13th February 2009:
Very cool chapter. The look on Draco's face was priceless. A very interesting definition of "As you wish", wherever did you get it?
Nicely written
Author's Response: thank you so much. i am glad that you liked this. i got the line from The Princess Bride. it was said on the movie.
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{reviewid: 2054581, reviewer: 'EmmaWatsonFan1211'}
13th February 2009:
MY FAVORITE STORY EVER!!
Author's Response: oh wow, thank you so much. i am glad that you liked this so much. your favorite story ever- one of the greatest compliments i could ever receive.
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{reviewid: 2054364, reviewer: 'stepnhunguyen'}
12th February 2009:
I think it's very detailed maybe perfect for valentines day.
Author's Response: oh thanks! i never thought of it as a Valentine's day fic, but that makes since. thank you so much for the lovely review.
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{reviewid: 2053504, reviewer: 'tashmash'}
11th February 2009:
what is the sequel called?
luv this one!!
Author's Response: the sequel is titled 'I Will Continue Wishing.' i hope that you check it out. thank you so much for the lovely review.
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{reviewid: 2052283, reviewer: 'bookworm101'}
9th February 2009:
u have to write a sequel this story is to great 4 u 2 leave there
Author's Response: thank you for the lovely review. a sequel is up if you want to check it out when you get a chance. thanks.
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{reviewid: 2051314, reviewer: 'amnitaleandra'}
8th February 2009:
is hermione in love with draco too or something because she said 'as you wish' ? or she's just testing him? write the sequel please! :))
Author's Response: thank you for the wonderful review. a sequel is up in case you are interested in checking it out and if you do, you will find your answer there. thanks again.
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{reviewid: 2051071, reviewer: 'e.mo'}
7th February 2009:
oh my god oh my god oh my god sequel yess!!!
aahh that is such a good cliffhanger!!! i want to know what happens next please!!
Author's Response: thank you so much. if you are interested, the sequel is up at the moment. you can check that out if you wish to do so. thanks again for the wonderful review.
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{reviewid: 2050761, reviewer: 'XPrettyYoungThingX'}
7th February 2009:
Really great but i think the beginnings a bit off. I think you cut too quickley to the direct quote that Malfoy uses, perhaps she should take longer to discover it and not immediatley rember where she'd heard them. I look forward to reading the sequal x
Author's Response: thank you so much. i liked your suggestion- it makes perfect sense. i hope that you check out the sequel when you get a chance. it is up now too.
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{reviewid: 2050692, reviewer: 'Tink_token'}
7th February 2009:
Love it. Beautifully and simply written. I'm not sure where you would go with a sequel. But i would love to see a prequel including the scenes where he has used the words 'as you wish', now that we are aware of the meaning behind them :) xx
Author's Response: thank you. funny that you mention that, but when i first began to write this about a year ago, i was planning on making it a short story with three to five chapters on different scenarios between the two of them. after awhile, things just did not seem to be working out and i was left to turn this into a one-shot. i am glad to hear that you liked this all the same though. that beats all compliments that could be offered my way.
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