Joey sounds familiar...like my heroine...?

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Please update soon! (:

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you're not suppose to resize TDA banners without permission from the artist.

Author's Response: I didnt, the banner is the exact size as it was given to me

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I usually don't like short chappies , but this one was really cool. I liked it.Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you! Im actually editing all of my chapters so this will eventually be a lot longer, but you'll just have to waite

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That's an excellent first chapter, I think this could turn out to be a rather interesting piece although I would of liked it if it was a bit longer :)
Can I just ask who the girl is on the banner? As I would like to use her on one of my banners but i just don't know who she is lol. x
Im now off to read chapter two [:

Author's Response: i dont know who she is, but carrieberrie from the darkarts forum would know. She is the one who made my banner. And thankyou for commenting

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I think this has great potential. Keep the writing up. It's really good, but don't be afraid of length. People like length. If you want a banner, I can make you one. Just e-mail me at solar_angel_2@yahoo.com with your preferences and I'll e-mail you the banner. If you like it, use it. As I said, great beginning. 10/10 update soon!

Author's Response: THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! I've been wanting a banner i promise to email you about it, but first tell me what preferences are?

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