This story is beautiful! And not just the plot but also the way it has been written is absolutely splendid. I simply love your characterisation of both Draco and Astoria.
I assume that this story has been abandoned, but really hope it hasn't. So I'm going to say it anyway- please continue it! Dont stop it now! Not here! Please update? :) This story has far to much potential to be left like this. Please?

But ofcourse, it is totally understandable if you don't want to :)

Kudos for this peice of work though!

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So I have been reading this none stop since I found it and I love it! Please update soon! It's really good one :D

MEL

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Breathless. Tearful. Ah!

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Ah, the details! The details! I love the way you really thought it all through - Death Row, the judicial wheels slowly grinding after the great climactic finish of the books...

Brilliant.

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Brill-iant!
Your structure and presentation is magnificent - as is your understanding of character. Lovely!

My only (minor) gripe is Pansy's hair colour. Perhaps the movies have trained me to think it black?

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You've certainly thrown another loop into the mix with this odd interaction between Draco and Astoria. His fascination with asserting power over her has me scratching my head. However, you are keeping me intrigued and I can't wait to see where it goes.

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Since I know the outcome--Astoria and Draco getting together--I am overcome with curiousity as to how you are going to get there. The age difference seems so big right now--Draco seems much older than 18 and she much younger than 16--that I am definitely wondering how a romance is going to spark out of this. But I love the intriguing post-War world you have created. Fantastic!

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Wow. That is pretty much all I can say. I loved how you created the tense and dark atmosphere, which fit the trial scene so well. I am intrigued by Draco and Harry's interactions. I never seen anything like this story, and I love it. I like that it is told in Draco's point of view, making the reader sympathetic to him, but without changing who he is. I also loved how you introduced Astoria. I can't wait to see where you take this. I did notice a couple of typos. Also, didn't Rufus Scrimgeour die in Deathly Hallows? Not sure about that but I thought he did. Oh well, not that big of a deal.

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You are an extremely gifted writer! I hope you continue this story, it is so well written!

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I absolutely LOVE your characterization of Draco. The dialogue is really spot-on. Your post-War world is certainly interesting, and so different being told by Draco's perspective. You have definitely intrigued me. This prologue is a great hook!

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Why won't you finish? It's such an incredibly well written story.

Author's Response: I took a very long break-- college and all. I'm hoping to post some new chapters soon! Sorry for the delay!

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LOVE LOVE LOVE! Please update soon! x

Author's Response: Thank you! Will do :)

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Ahhh I love the whole word you've created here! It's around 3 a.m. where I am, but I will read on! x

Author's Response: Aw! What dedication! Thank you so much for reading and responding!

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Right from the chapter summary, I thought it was going to be a good chapter! Can't wait to read more! x

Author's Response: Thank you!

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God I love this story! You've actually made me like Draco and Astoria together! Lol no more words than that. Hope you update soon! xx

Author's Response: Haha- as soon as I read that Draco and Pansy weren't together in the end, I had to think about how this Astoria girl might've stolen him away. Glad you like it!

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I really like your portrayal of Draco - I think he's very in character, he's not too nice which is good, but there's still something about him that's slightly changed after the war. I like your build-up for Draco and Astoria as well - I really like that it's not too fast and unbelieveable! I really like your style of writing !

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I only got this far the last time I read this story. So now I've got loads of brilliant chapters ahead of me to read - yay! Lol. I like your form of dialogue - you have a way to keep the reader interested, at least that's how it's like for me. It's always exciting , I love that.

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I remember reading this story a while ago but I realised I never reviewed! And I do think you deserve reviews for this!

What I like about this story is your characters and your descriptions - two things I think are really important in a good story. The settings and environment are like.. I don't know how I'd describe lol, but they're perfect for the plot and the characters. It feels like you've really thought EVERYTHING through, I like that. I liked Draco's character.. and Astoria as well, even though I ship Draco/Pansy lol.

I think it's an interesting aspect, writing about what happened right after the war. So thank you for writing this story!

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This story is intriguing, the picture that you paint of the aftermath of the war is completely believable, the Ministry buckles down, not wanting another dark lord, but instead turns into an opressive government towards purebloods. Poor Harry! You can tell that this isn't the way he wanted it to happen.

And Draco, I love how you wrote him, some authors make him too nice and I'm like, hello! He's Draco Malfoy! He may have matured, but that doesn't mean he is an altruist.

Astoria, I love the character you are building. The fact that she is so young yet intelligent and cunning is totally going to be a turn on for Draco, I can just tell.

Please keep doing what you are doing!

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I love this story I have actually spent a week looking for it to read a new chapter

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Honestly one of the best fanfics I have ever read.
I hope you haven't given up on it. I will be so so sad if this story remains unfinished.

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heey

I love thsi story! plesae update soon. :D i really like the characterisation, i like how draco stays himself and does not regret everything he did before, like it happens in most other astoria/draco stories... i also like how astoria is a little evil too :) please update soon! i ahte cliffhangers.

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I love how you wrote the trial and how you ended it with Pansy saying that Astoria was an orphan with no sympaty or anything.

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"The entire bloody world had gone mental." This sentence caught my attention ^_^. I think you wrote Draco and the wizarding world after the battle really well. Off to read the next chapter...

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That was good. Especialy the end.

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