Cool and thanks for writing. I liked how you wrote Draco, Astoria.

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Awesome introduction. I can't wait until the next chapter.

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this story is quite excellent. your writing is exceptional and the character development so far is superb. though i traditionally steer clear of stories with shorter chapters, i found that the detail and writing allowed for as much to happen in such short chapter as many other longer chapters, which is a credit to this story. i also like that this story sticks to canon and i am really interested to see how the slytherins interact after the war. i am extremely excited about the draco/asteria story. please keep updating frequently. cheers.

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Thank you. (: I'll update soon, hopefully.

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I liked this a lot. You introduced her character in a very good way, and we got a glimpse of her as a person. Her apperance is interesting - the way she's treated because of her beauty. It was intriguing. I'm glad though that she and Draco already have a relationship, but I'm curious if we're to learn how they'll go from this chapter, or if we'll be taken back through time. Overall, beautiful writing and lovely first chapter. Can't wait for an update and this is headed to my favourites! =)

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Thank you so much. (: I'll update once I get my inspiration back.

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i loved your story. in the way you portrayed asteria it is believable that draco would fall for her. keep it up. :>

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Thanks! I'll try my hardest to keep up the work.

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awesome! loved it. 10/10. I love stories that include characters we don't know much about. there's so much to do with them. i liked this whole plot idea, but the only thing is I wished it was longer. great job!

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Thank you. (: I'm going to admit to it now: I'm awful at writing long chapters. (: Just a warning.

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Va-va-vom. Well, I believe I've already told you what I think about your writing, missy. :P I love where this is going, and you havehavehave to update soon! Or.. I'll just stalk you and eat your brains. ^_^

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-goes into hiding whilst writing chapter two-

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are you doing stories for ALL of the new pairings?? Cus that would be REALLY cool of you ;)

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Nope. (: I just got a plot bunny and I entered a challenge on the forums with this pairing. (: I may consider it, though, once I finish a few of my WIPs.

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Yay, I've been wanting someone to use this pairing!
10/10.

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I've been meaning to write it and got a mean plot bunny today. :P

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Ahhh... I love this story already! It's sounds SO romantic! 1o/1o!

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Thank you. (: I hope it lives up to your hopes.

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Awww... this catches my interest for sure... You've started off portraying Asteria in a very realistic way! :)

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Thank you. (:

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You must have read my mind. I was just thinking about starting up an Astoria(Asteria)/Draco fic. The Astoria I was dreaming up was much different from yours, but I liked reading your version of it.

This chapter was a bit short. When I saw the wordcount, I sort of assumed that it wouldn't be very well written, but I was wrong. Your descriptions are nice, and the scene that you set up reminded me so much of "Gone With The Wind".

All in all, an interesting read, and a story that I'll probably be back to read again.

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Thank you. (: The scene was actually based on the Barbeque scene from GWTW. It's my favorite movie. (: I hope to see you back! I enjoyed reading your review.

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