That was sooo good I think you ended it right because it allowed us to see how much they loved each other! I can't see any wrong punctuation so well done :) Report Review
pretty good! never would have thought of something like this! pointz for creativity!! lolz good job! Report Review
I can't believe that I have never reviewed this! This is Alassie, the author of The Lovely Life of Lily Potter, and as you (possibly) know I try to review everyone who reviews/favorites my stories. I still can't believe I haven't reviewedthis! I have read it at least twice already! I am so sorry, I always try to review what I read. I just reread this, and loved it as much the (at least thrid?) time I around as I did the first time. Very well written! Sorry for the delay, but definitely a 10/10. Keep up the good work! ~Alassie~Author's Response: Haha! Thank you! Report Review
this was beautifully written. I ship Hermione/Ron too *squee* absolutely amazing one-shotAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review; they never fail to brighten my day! Thanks again! Report Review
NO! You shouldn't have stopped at the end of that. It was amazing what you did. That was such a beautiful ending. Words cannot describe it. I love this fic. It's just so awesome. Keep it up :DAuthor's Response: Thank you! I know my grammer for my stories sucks, I've been trying to fix it up for ages, but I cant seem to get around to it! Thanks! Report Review
hi again, (how many times have I reviewed now?) i read your responce on betaing one of my stories and I just realized that I put the wrong email in, so here is the correct one - oblack_@hotmail.com I accidently put a period at the end before and thats why I never got an email. Sorry Report Review
No, the second part ties it all together. Great story!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Hey! I love this. Did you write it after reading book 7? I don't think you should've stopped after Lav-Lav's article, it's great the way it is. Wow...Victor's dad tried to kill his son? That was a bit...dramatic. lol, I love this. BTW what kind of cookie are you going to give me? haha keep writing, you're really good! ~RAuthor's Response: Hi! yes I wrote it after reading all the books, I know! dramatic eh? I was feeling over-dramatic when I wrote it, lol! Chocolate chip? maybe white chocolate? (WHO DOESNT LOVE WHITE CHOCOLATE?!) thanks for reviewing! ~L~ Report Review
I liked it. I've never really been a fan of the Ron/Hermione ship and the Krum/Hermione ship but I loved this. I thought you did a really good job. Sorry I haven't got around to reading this until now, I've been fairly busy with school work. Anyway, great job and I can't wait to see if you have more stories in mind. Emma :DAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! unfortunately for you guys... (but YAY FOR ME!) I'm going to South Africa for 2 months, I might be able to upload the occasional thing, but yea... I have HEAPS more story ideas, I just need to get around to typing them up! LOL! kisses! Lisa Report Review
Nice. I really like how no one said anything until the last possible second, and even then, only after Ron appeared. How perfectly funny.Author's Response: LOL! I thought so too, who knows... maybe they were kind of waiting for him *wink* Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hello! I told you I'd read and review your stories, so here I am (even if it took me awhile, sorry!). I really like it, but I definitely think it should've ended at the article. I love the idea, and it has good description. Well done! xoxox ~ginny_malfoy22Author's Response: Thank you! I've had a mix of responses to that issue... and i must say I liked it after the article... but thank you for your opinion! Report Review
pretty good story. i love hermione/ron stories so much anyway!Author's Response: Thank you! I love them too... obviously.... tee hee, kisses! Lisa Report Review
this story was awesome! i liked lavender's article. she does seem like the type to be a reporter.Author's Response: Thank you! she does doesn't she? really nosey... Report Review
Well i think you could possible make another short story as sequalAuthor's Response: Thank you for the review, I will look into doing a another short story as a sequel, but I am really busy atm, working on my first story. Report Review
aww that was cutteee♥ you could have stopped at the article buut...it was cute about the tickling ;)Author's Response: Thanks! I could've... but like you said, the tickling was sweet! Report Review
Awww, this was cute. it was very fluff, you have a talent for it!!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Since you reviewed my story, I decided to review yours. I really liked the plot, very interesting! I DON'T think you should have ended it at Lavender's article, just because 1) My favorite part was at the end: "...really this Love thing, it was all worth it in the end, no matter how long you have to wait, someone will always love you, for who you are, and never change that…." That's a really good line! 2)It made it longer and who doesn't like long chapters? Anyway, nice story (I'm going to read your second one; the summary sounded really interesting)! Mrs Roonil Waslib Oh and I almost forgot: 10/10Author's Response: aww! thank you!!! Report Review
awesome lisa!! -hugs your writing- look forward to getting to read more stories!Author's Response: Thank you! (me neither.... lol) kisses! Lisa Report Review
Very very sweet and cute. I'm glad I got the chance to read it (thanks for asking me to). I'm a huge Ron/Hermione fan so I adored the happy ending. Thanks for reading a few of my stories ("You and Me" and "Pulling Me Closer")- I'll read your other story now! :) -quidditch77Author's Response: thank you so much! I love reviews like this!!! *cookie?* kisses! Lisa Report Review
WOW! I really like this story... i think that the whle thing was really good. I like the part after lavender's article it added the little extra part to this story. Nice job! Was this your first story you wrote or was this just the first one you put on here? ~Hellen MalfoyAuthor's Response: Hi! thank you so much for your review! this isn't my first story I wrote, but the first I put on. (as none of the other ones were completely finished yet -or at least, I wasn't completely happy about them-) My first story is my longest so far it's 40-something pages, and nearly finished, so the chapters for that will be coming up soon, I submitted another story yesterday, it's NOT a sequel to this story... but it's sweet none-the-less, (and I changed it around so it fitted in with J.K's Deathly Hallows.... :) kisses! Lisa *cookie?* Report Review
Aww! I loved it! It was really sweet!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love these reviews!!! kisses! Lisa *cookie?* Report Review
Aww, how sweet! what´s happening in the next chap? Oh, by the way... I reviewed! Can I have my cookie now?!Author's Response: thank you so much for your review! this is a one-shot, so there isn't another chapter, but....... if i get more reviews like this, I'll look into doing an epilogue... I do have a story I'm putting up now, (so it should be validated in a few days...) it's another Ron/Hermione one, but it's NOT a sequel to this... and I have two stories that are like 40 pages each (sorted into chapters of course!) so I'll be putting some chapters of those up soon... Sure, here it be: (bad English I know....) *COOKIES!* kisses! Lisa Report Review
This was really good i enjoyed it :D yay cookies lol Well written as well :PAuthor's Response: Thank you! I knew bribing people with cookies would work, i mean, WHO DOESN'T LIKE COOKIES?!?! thank you for your review, and here's your cookie! kisses! Lisa Report Review
hey very great first story. i liked very much. 10/10Author's Response: Thank you! I'm sorry for the grammatical errors, I'll do better next time, kisses! Lisa Report Review
really great loved it! 10/10Author's Response: thank you so much! kisses! Lisa Report Review
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