Beautiful insight into the mind of Severus. I was rendered speechless :O Congratulations on this terrific story! :)Author's Response: Speechless? Wow, I'm glad you liked it that much. Thank you for the review! Report Review
This was really great! I really liked the plot! I've never seen an idea like that one before... it was really interesting! Bravo! Snape's hopes were really well written, and extremely believable. Sure, it was a tiny bit AU, but written well enough to bring in AU-haters. It was VERY believable! I loved how Snape was written, especially, you've captured all his hopes and dreams of power and glory in love here. Nice work!
~lllbAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing. I'm glad you found it to be believable and interesting!
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I liked this story. Kind of makes Snape seem a bit more human, rather than cold and snakelike. This was well written ... and left wide open, just in case you want to add to it. I think this is another one of those marauder era stories that you can just let your imagination run away with you on. Keep up the good work 10/10Author's Response: Hey there! I'm glad you liked it and thought it was well-written. I always thought there was a reason behind Snape's cold behavior, even past his love for Lily. I liked playing around with this idea to explain it.
Thanks so much for the review!
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I like how you took Severus' character and evolved it while he was in his first year. Your descripitions are amazing and the characterizations are great. This is a good one shot. Amazing writing!Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked the idea. I must admit that it was one of my more creative ones. I played around with the idea of extending it, but I think it's better as a one-shot.
Thanks again for reviewing! I appreciate it.
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Hello! This is Indigo Seas from the forums, here with the review you requested.
I really, really liked reading this fiction! You managed to keep good characterization, while still twisting the characters a little. That is hard to do for some authors, so I applaud you for that!
I think I've said this about every review I've left today, but your plot was very original. I don't think I've ever read a one-shot about Snape, wanting to be a Gyffindor. Well done!
I couldn't spot grammar or spelling mistakes, but I think I was too involved in your story to care. :) I really could not take my eyes off the screen while reading this. I was too busy following the story than to catch any mistakes you might have had. Really, really good job.
The way you described Slytherin at first was fantastic. The line, "Originally, Slytherin was for those who valued power, and worked to get it no matter what the odds" was amazing.
Again, a really wonderful story you have here. I'm sure many people after me will find themselves enjoying it. Thanks SO much for requesting it!
IndigoAuthor's Response: Wow, thanks for being so quick! I'm glad you got so involved in my story that you might have overlooked any mistakes (though I hope I don't have any). I hope it will have the same effect on other readers!
I'm very proud of my characterization here actually, because usually I end up twisting them OOC. It was fun to play around with the Gryffindor/Slytherin perspectives. =]
Thanks for the lovely review!
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Hi! This is a very good story. It seemed quite realistic to me. I liked how you described Snape's consideration.Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewing! i always thought there was more to snape, even more than JKR told. this idea was just so crazy but realistic at the same time that i had to write it. Report Review
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