Love it :) Is there a sequel? Report Review
this was amazing, as are all of your other stories. you did a wonderful job of setting this one up and making everything believable. your characterizations were incredible, as always. wonderful job! keep up the amazing writing!! (: Report Review
Whoa. I didn't expect to find another DraMione story this good. I know that when I read Blood in my Heart, I knew that I would be going to your ID and checking out which other Draco/Hermione stories you've written, because I'm a sucker for them and because I tend to like other stories of the same pairing when written by the same person.
But I didn't expect this.
For one, Draco and Hermione's obvious annoyance with each other in the beginning was just so... amusing. The way the other so constantly irritated them, and the other was constantly on their minds was so true, because people have a habit of thinking more of the people who annoy them.
But when Ron decided to take a break from Hermione because of her "obsession" with Draco? That just made me grin wide.
And then Draco's want for her, and how he was ignoring her so that she didn't find out what he was thinking, and she couldn't, that was also amusing.
And the end? I wasn't quite sure what to think. My mouth was hanging open.
And what Draco said? “Let me get this straight, Weasley breaks off his engagement to you because it’s bloody obvious to him that you want me, you then go and prove his point by shagging me in a storage closet... And then, you seem to think that you two are getting back together?!"
Yes, that was basically the essence of the whole story jammed into one sentence.
You really write amazing stories.
I'm going back to your ID and checking out the other DraMione stories you've written. Again. :D Report Review
Great job! I think a lot of your D/Hr (I absolutely hate the word "Dramoine") stories are interesting, because they stay away from the usual, sorta cliche stories that get them together. I liked the tension you slowly built up (in the course of 8000 words, which is extremely long for a one-shot) and as sad as I am with the short ending, I don't think it could've been better :) I wish there would be a sequel of some sort! Report Review
"Bone-melting contentment". Well I know how that feels. LOL!
Wow, you sure know how to write the sweet... and the spicy.
And I loved it that when it was over, he still kissed her shoulder and lips again. It shows a bit of caring on his part and almost a 'thank you' of sorts.
Beautifully written... as always. Thank you for sharing your talents!
This one was HOT! Report Review
sexy or what! loved this - thanks. x Report Review
Absolutely beautiful!!! This is ... this is ... I don't even have the word for it. You are a literary genius!!! I haven't come across a fanfic this intricately written; the psychology behind the characters, as well as the pristine writing style and the witty dialogue; it's perfect.
This shows immense flexibility in your writing, from the very academic, almost semi-formal fashion which you began this with (captivating all the way through) to the intense, passionate love scene between Draco and Hermione, and the cliffhanger ending; it's an immortalised work of art!
If you're still only writing fan fiction, I hope you get to your senses and start getting some work published, because you are brilliant!
10/10 and favourited Report Review
A second reading. (Sigh.) It's so very satisfying. Thanks for sharing your magical skill. Report Review
Wow... I rarely find myself in awe of a one-shot. This was amazing. Not at all OOC. Normally, I find sequels to one-shots be poor follow-ups that are better left undone... but this? It demands more. Too much is left unsaid, unexplored, undone. I find myself reading it over again to find unseen details.
Put my poor unsatisfied mind at ease. Please update? :)Author's Response: Haha with such a plea, how could I refuse? :P There is definitely a sequel to this one. Still in the works but hopefully up soon. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Report Review
This is one of the most FANTASTIC stories I've ever read !
Your writing style is superb, this is the first text EVER on hpff for which I had to look up words in the dictionary (my mother tongue is not english you see, I'm from Belgium) and in my eyes, that's a good omen ^^ The story develops in a very natural way, not forced or farfetched as some other dramione stories ...
I was really impressed ! :D
Nina xAuthor's Response: Haha that's wonderful to hear :D I'm thrilled I added to your vocabulary as well. Thanks so much for the lovely review :D Report Review
wow. i really enjoyed this. it really got me hooked once i started it. Report Review
Highly, highly amused xD That narrator! I hear a dry English butler for some reason. I rarely ever read D/H, but a good snark (and high vocabulary) trumps that, and you've got both!Author's Response: I literally snorted aloud when I read this. You really can't go by a really good English butler for narration can you? :P Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
This is a wonderfully written one-shot. Loved it!!!Author's Response: Thanks for the lovely review :) Report Review
brilliant one shot i loved itAuthor's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
Fabulously delicious. LOVE how you keep them in character. But you left me hanging like that? Too cruel!! Do you want us to beg you for another chapter? Okay, I'm begging. Love your vocabularly - really fun to read. Thanks so much!Author's Response: Woo hoo! I love begging :P Actually I have a semi-completed sequel to this on my desktop.. I'm trying to motivate myself to finish but lovely comments like yours certainly help lol. Thank you! Report Review
O.o Amazing.. and Adorable... I love it.Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
very interesting story. the fact that it is only a one-shot is disappointing, but other than that, great job. Report Review
OMG L0v3d iT...
Soo0ooo sw33T... Report Review
First of all - have you published this piece somewhere else before? I think I've read it on some other site.
Anyways, whether or not I've read this before, I must say that this is an excellent piece of writing. You are a great writer, as I'm sure you already know. I have absolutely no complaints or anything I'd like to point out. Well - I suppose I could point out that Draco is utterly delicious. I wish it was me working with him. :D
All in all - great job.
10/10. Report Review
You will continue this right? Too good not to. Report Review
I found this small mistake:
You said before: "...if one was interested in that whole blond-haired, blue-eyed and wealthy kind of handsome..." ; then you described his eyes as grey. No big deal, but I thought I might mention.
I liked it. It was believable, and quite un-cliche if you ask me. I'm glad you made Hermione subtly sensual rather than the impossible transformations most people seem to think is plausible. Report Review
That was a good story :)
Also, your banner is absolutely beautiful, you really have skills in making them. Report Review
hehehehehe, evil laughter, it sounds like there's a very interesting sequalout there. Now i need to go look for it, excelent though. Totaly a 10/10!! ^.^
~*Jenni*~ Report Review
i flippin' love this!10/10Author's Response: Haha thank you! It was a lot of fun to write. Report Review
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