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Review #1, by D.E.W. Chapter Four

20th December 2009:
It's wonderful! I can't wait to see how it all unfolds. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you :) Hopefully the next chapter will keep you happy.

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Review #2, by Mia Chapter Four

19th December 2009:
I like it so far. I'll admit I was a bit confused at first but now I get it! Hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: I know I'm really late responding to this, but thank you for reviewing. Hopefully the next chapter will be as good.

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Review #3, by alicedarling Chapter Four

31st August 2009:
i like this very much- i like how you've portrayed them!
how did you get a banner?
whats TDA?


Author's Response: thank you for reading and reviewing!
TDA is the the dark arts. It's a forum where you can request banners for your stories. The website is the-dark-arts[.]net

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Review #4, by alifromnm Chapter Three

9th August 2009:
Very interesting so far.vampiric cousins.sort of Twilight meets Harry Potter! LOL

Author's Response: Haha I guess you could say that.
Thank you so much for reviewing, lack of them was making me not want to keep writing!

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Review #5, by Forever Everett Chapter Two

29th July 2009:
I feel like Draco is a little out of character in this... Perhaps it's just a situation where his swagger/snarky behavior isn't needed to be displayed? Anyhow, you really have a knack at making it absolutely necessary to read onward!

This deserves more reviews than it has. (:

Author's Response: You know I was reading over this last night and I said the same thing about Draco. Haha but don't worry, he will be more like the Draco we all know in later chapters. Thank you so much for the review!

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Review #6, by Forever Everett Chapter One

29th July 2009:
I, for one, can say that I'm quite intrigued about where this will go! I'm a little iffy about Paige becoming a bit too cliched or too 'Mary Sue'-like, but you seem to be really able to direct it away from that! Your writing style is very descriptive & mature. (: I applaud this!

Author's Response: I'm really trying to avoid that with Paige and hopefully you guys will like some of the things she gets herself into later on. ;]
And thank you for taking the time to review, these make my day. =]

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Review #7, by the_princess_of_the_darkness Chapter One

8th November 2008:
wow good start=) you should continue=)
i cant wait to read more=)
nice to have this paige i dont know whoo she is but i am exited=)) i can kind of guess but its cool to have her as a mystery=))
i cant wait to

Author's Response: thank you very much =]
its nice to get feedback for once
as soon as my life calms down
the second chapter should be up

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Review #8, by ChoS_sista_gurl Chapter One

1st October 2008:
yikes, BLAISE IS A VAMPIRE!!! i wonder if he and paige are the "good" vampires or the bad ones that suck peoples blood and kill them...

good start, though i wish it were longer.

anyway, i'm on a reviewing spree to help make up for the lost reviews of authors that i remember have reviewed my stories before, even if they were lost. hope this helps!


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Review #9, by Lexilove999 

29th April 2008:
no why did you stop there?


Author's Response: im sorry

i just have a lot going on right now

i promise as soon as band calms down that ill write more k=]
thank so much for reviewing=]
it seriously made my day

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Review #10, by tennisqueen 

29th April 2008:
Great story. They are half-siblings, right? So...they won't be able to have a thing together. Hm.Harry gets bitten and his powers increase? Got me there! Hope you start writing soon.

Author's Response: really good guess

but harry isnt her brother sorry

im keeping u guys guessing on that one for

as long as i can=]
as soon as all of my band stuff ends ill write more promise=]

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